MrTriMurda

Lol..Funny Track but I like The Expressing you did,it's more hip-hop than what most people do their best on,and think is Hip-Hop,it's about expressing yourself like Gospel or blues or R&B,Keep doing your thing Bruh, But Trust yourself 1st.have your back 1st, keep whatever is left for the rest. Peace homey,Stay up!..~T.R.I~

The Beats coming along good,it is missing one or two things though But thats not my area of expertise, None the less I am eager to hear what lyrics you put up for it, A few come to mind that's how I know the beat has a lot of potential. Keep me posted on what you do with this,I would like to see how it comes along. Keep Grinding and keep working at it.Peace! ~T.R.I~

I actually like this 1 mah G!real laid back and eazy.simple track but good Hook, Lights up to that one,I would like to hear this one mastered and pumping mad hard,keep it up pimpn.1! ~T.R.I~

jea we can do that,I was getting my info up on Nato,and it was really messed up,like it Brought me to tears inside,and this is only from my point of view, I can only imagine from your own or others who we're there point of view.bad things happen here all the time and it's sad but that's a hole nother level of bad.I will contact you soon then.

hmmm.Well im very picky with my beats but So far I like this 1,too bad I can't download it like others did,the beat was nice,leave the sirens,they add umph to it.i want to hear what you did,but I think this beat has a lot of potential and we can broaden the play of it,send me a copy and I'll tell you what I mean.I freestyled something sick to this,if only I had the beat,(hint hint)lol...

I like this track,real stuff,and we all or most of us have been through this one too many times,my best to you My G,Keep Spitting Raw My Dude. R.I.P To Our Fallen.

I love this song and beat my dude,Lyrics we're Real as hell,now this is the kinda music i wish I heard more of,not that B.S flossing and pretending someone balling though they broke like people do,it's pure and you can feel it in your soul...Tks for the refresh,reasons like this I go in so hard with passion.

Eh,it's been a while since I have been on or commented,I think I will post another track today just for fun,I like the beat and everything,felt the versus,last verse especially, I think the same things many times,When I don't like an artist I just ignore them,but when I write about them it really means a lot.now give me some tips people,I record on wack *ss Garage Band,so the quality is always annoying to my ears, what can we do about this cause I have written so many songs I just get tired or recording them and Im a novice,I had Logic but I lost a disc,and I pay child support so Im not trying to just get programs I can't use,GB is at least somewhat easy except when it comes down to mixing down,so any advice will help,Best tip though,if anyone sounds like Em,they will get destroyed by Em on purpose,he likes people to be them and sound unique not the same,but I think your artist can get that off if he keeps that in mind,he has good talent,words and flow,he's by my area,maybe I'll bump into him and collabo,if not it is what it is,just tell em to keep spitting hard no matter what,real mc's are a dying breed.Yup! 2fingers,I liked the whole works on the track.peace.(hey ima add a song I wrote and recorded this morning,it's fresh off the boat,give some input when it's approved)

I actually like this song,everyone knows me,if I don't like a song I just ignore it and not waste my time,rather then hate,but when I write something it means it surely has potential,you surely have the lyrics and flow,Good Stuf my G.(Love The HOOK ALSO)

I like this beat,it's crazy,I want to try an experiment with this one,I'll tell you if anything comes of it,keep making that music.

mmm... yea this song is going to have to be put through the motions, it has write and record something special written all over it, "SI YO MUERO-If I Die" I love that idea, see I was going to originally just write a song to this,but maybe a little bit of smooth hip-hop might do it some justice, like you speaking to a woman or someone close and ask them what would they feel or go through if I died, and then point out some special and beautiful things to compliment the sadness on if you did die, it's tuff to explain, i just have to write it out with you and we'll make it work, (Warning---other hip-hop artist I said it 1st,so don't try writing lyrics later saying you came up with it or something good and trying to cut throat cuz your done 1st, stuff like that will get your feelings hurt for being non original,lol) jea we going to work on a song with this one as well as a few others, i have many projects and collabo's so give me a little and I will have some ideas tossed in the air for you and we'll see which one or one's you catch. beautiful song though,very so indeed.

VERY NICE SONG, I AM NEVER ONE TO COMMENT ON QUALITY CAUSE I STAY NOT TOUCHING MY MUSIC QUALITY UP OR EVEN KNOW HOW, BUT IT SOUNDS REALLY GOOD, VERY NICE WORDS, I CAN FEEL THE MESSAGE, I HAD LIKE 3 ALBUMS ABOUT OR REFERRING TO MY EX AND MY BABIES MOTHER SO I FEEL YOU,AND YOU CAN NEVER JUST MOVE ON TILL YOUR HEART IS READY, UNLESS YOU ARE ABLE TO CONVINCE YOURSELF TO BE OVER IT WHICH IS NOT AN EASY FEAT, I WOULD LIKE TO HEAR MORE ON WHAT YOU GOT, PERHAPS PICK YOUR BRAIN N A FEW THINGS SINCE I ALSO SONG WRITE FOR MANY GENRE'S PERHAPS I CAN WORK A SONG IN OR TWO WITH YOU FOR MY OWN MUSIC, KEEP WRITING AND DOING WHAT YOU DO WHERE EVER IT COMES FROM JUST BE SURE IT COMES FROM THE HEART 1ST AND YOU SEEM TO BE ON THAT PATH SO KEEP DOING YOUR THING I WISH YOU THE BEST.

O.K a few Freaky parts,lol... but other than that it's a good beat, an stil even with those parts it makes it very creative so it works 2getha!I'm very interested in hearing the outcome. ;)

~T.R.I-09~

chek it,I don't tlk but b about it,ur trak wuz hard so i freestyled ova it, if u feelin it lemme kno!if not,as per my rule,i wil take it off,which haz not happened yet,but who knowz!if u do like perhaps I will write wrdz if u koo wit it!my idea iz totally dif frum my freestyle kuz who knowz wut u guna say freestylin...now i herd sutn bout a mixtape?..well u hav a lot uv good an wak artist hitn u up I'm sure(no offense wak artist.lol but if u not redi don't akt like u r,b patient like d rest uv us wuz,he guna hav volume 2 or 3 i'm sure,lol)..but anyway i wrk by proof,so there it iz,chek it out,tellme wut u thnk! we kan do it up betr if u like!an keep makin dem trax!so i kan keep makin wax!like where u goin!..oh an if n.e1 eva in d teaneck n.j area or jerz period,i hav a few connects,letme kno wit sum trax an I'll get u a spot lite at one uv d clubs,buffet,drinks,woman, good muzik,don't wori bout beef,i gotcha baks,ur my guest an no1 will cross me there!stuf don't start 2afta 9p so u hav time!lemme kno,i wana share d luv bak!no reazn we all kan't collabo an make it 2getha!serious inquiries onli,kum wit dat b.s an ima hav 2chek u!..ur crew iz invited tho my g!so u good!tlkn bout dz otha 1'z who swear dey god mc's an their fan base hazn't passd 10(not including frendz an fam,real fanz,lol)ima bully lemme stop! yar must fukn hate me,hey I wuz nice Til sum uv yar jus pissd me d f*k off,..BAD MOVE!.. ;)

~T.R.I-09~

~T.R.I-09~

I like this as well, Good words,stuff I would say so you know what it is, Like the arrogance,nutn wrong wit bein confident,atleast u bakn it up wit ur lyrics. very interestin!Like how u repd peeps,Goodtimez!much luv bruh!Beat wuz infuego az well! YEZZIR INDEEDY!

~T.R.I-09~

WOWWW!..your words made me shake,this part "i stood by my family and cried with my friends :: until now :: i couldn't see how everything is coming back around :: how every part of me had to die as well :: my joy and my heart grew too cold to tell " made me remember something I kept inside, your words are pretty perfect to be honest, simba,lol..classic, and you get my love as well,I love a lot of you guys, especially the one's who stuck by me after accusations that proved to be false(still didn't get my apology from them you know,they know who they are,no names,lol) I'm over it,in our line of work when you get too loved even good people turn to the dark side. But your one of the good one's and those who let it play out and not look like fools,oh and I got a song for them,that's my retaliation. ;) but this song and beat it's weird how it makes me feel, so please keep doing your thing,I can make words but what better one's then the one's from your heart? "I begged her not to leave me",my acapella is similar in feel,it's real and from the heart and even that gets hated on, so yes don't get discouraged and keep doing your thing,I am always up for writing for any genre and any one as passionate and talented as yourself, so you on my friends list, hitme up for anything,advice,(given or taken)collabs, help, we will work on your vocals for sure. Ima make my comeback soon, just need to handle a lot of private things so I stopped music for a while,but my brain is always in motion,so you need ideas just let me know, I want to give my full support and more if possible,it's about you now,so keep on keeping on LM brother! peace

~T.R.I-09~

I agree,as well as I asked a few peoples opinions who don]t prefer the rock genre and they liked it,so that says a lot.very smooth and the guitar is very well played,who did that?..over all I think you have a good thing, so keep doing what you do best.

~T.R.I-09~

i like da beat,pretti smooth mah G,like d hook also,if it wuz alil bit harda wit dat hook,it wuld b alot mor 2wrk wit!keep it up,good potential ova here.

this was pretti tuff,u thnk u kan make sort uv d same sampl but wit a fasta harda beat,i hav sum sh*t tlk 4 sum peopl, an it's ova a b*tch,sum dudez tryin b moses an save ho*z an putn woman b4 there men,so I had 2ded sum peopl,who thnk dey bosses an dey fake az hell, tlk ish,but hav not d gall 2step 2me!sooo u kno how dat goez,ima kallem out an force em 2bring it!feelme,but ima dwn load dis n.e-way kuz it's tite!1!

~T.R.I-09~

interesting stuff, I really like it,you have more talent then most people I know, to be positive is good, I have those, just right now I have all the world of stress on my mind especially due to my Babies mother,but none the less I'm happy we have people like you, cause people like me need the woosah!...trust me when i tell you that.keep it up hun, I would surely like to hear more of what you got, and the choice is yours, but give me feed back if you want, or don't,this is your moment to shine, so shine Bright as can be!peace!...

damn dude,u realli keep impressing me,ur veri versitile, if dey didn't use dis,u shuld letme try sumthng,i'll write wrdz 2it,ima gr8 song writer(not self proclaimed) i write sum wrdz,we get sum1 2sing it,an perhaps i'll do hip-hop 2it,but sutn frum d hart like i usually try!stay up,i wana c wut nu stuf u kum up wif,ima thro dis on my faves.peace...

~T.R.I-09~

jea i agree wit dude,i like the way ur recordin soundz,daz wut i need,i literally dropd 3gz hookn my mac book up den realized damn!all dis stuf an i don't even kno how 2use it well,den i found out i need mor stuff 2tighten d sound,too much stuff meng,but i felt ur wrdz,u tlk wut we tlk out here,nutn but dat real tlk!i'm doin dis dolo but I appreciate ur comments to my track,i did do it fast but wen i herd it later(soberd up,lol)i realized d same thng,jus don't wana chance it an mess d trak up all 2getha, but nun d less,stay up mah g!n.e advice is welcomed az well az assistance bruh! i like da name, iz tite!jus stay up,ima sho luv an thro ur trak on my faves,1!...

this one was awesome,had to comment on this one as well,adding it to my faves, surprisingly My 1st luv of genres is Classical 1st,just happened to be so talented in poetry that it flows easily and I have rythm, but if i could trust me I would do piano and prob Violin as well,ooh and sax too,but piano is my fave...keep bringing them, so I can keep listening and being inspired.

hey tks 4 d luv b4, I realli appreciated it myself, now your piano skills are quite Good i must admit, Ima fan of all genre's and i luv playin keyboard,been teaching myself by ear i luvd it so much,wish i kuld play like u,ur soundz inspire me 2want 2 do sum stuff,i want to incorporate different soundz wif my muzik, hip-hop doesn't hav 2alwayz b so badazz!...i jus want 2xpress myself an dats all!i hava lot of passion,an alot of stories 2tell,God 4bid,i jus want d world 2hear it incase I don't make it 2d nxt day!...i added dis song 2my faves cause it's good to hear amongst a few others i heard,keep doing ur thng,u got my support!...

MUSICIANS UNITE!...

~T.R.I-09~

hey i felt d luv u gave me,i take comments an luv like urz 2hart frum otha real artist! c daz wut i need beats an a bettr way 2record,forcin myself 2make beats wen beats aren't my thng puts a burden on me, let alone tryin 2hav a decent recordin,i suck at engineerin so i giv u plenty props on on wut ur doin!mite hav 2pik ur brain humbly i mite add so i kan keep pikn my weight up az well!my 1st album wuz good,now i'm doin my 2nd on my own an it's tuffr den i thought!..def need sum ur ur trax in my arsenal,an perhaps a few uv thoze beats,dey we're hard az hell man!4realz!...stayup!...