It does sound like a video game, and if that's what you're going for it def works. The instruments that sound a little less pro are the arpeggiator and the video game sounding synth. I think what I meant to say was they could sound a little crisper.
I don't really know what you mean by crisper. For theses twos I used 8-bit oscillators (triangle for the arpeggiator and square for the other one) and I cut high frequencies in order to make them sound less agressive. You think that I could remove this cut, so they sound maybe more retro ?
I like the concept and layout. The only thing I would say is use instruments that sound a little more professional. Other than that the mix is good and it's a good length as well.
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