I dig this too. I think you should beef it up with a few more well placed guitar parts. Id like to take a stab at it myself. If I come up with something I will send you a copy back!
thanks coney! yea i was feeling this joint alot... im tryna start my own lil project with it. but then again. i might bang out a few other things first. Hit me up for a collabo family
Wow man,...I think this sounds pretty good. Slap always makes a great addition. Nice piano work! Refreshingly different track to hear on the sight. Easily faved!
I think you would sound great singing some coutry style stuff. Not a bad job man. I expected this to be a complete disaster but it was actually pretty decent. Kudos man!
Country huh? I get that alot actually. Not the biggest fan of it so it can be an interesting pill to swallow. I appreciate the honesty and review alot. Thanks man.
I really like the progression through out the track. Nice selection on many different drum sounds! I think this has an industrial feel to it. Kinda got a grimey feel. I would love to hear some strong emotional vox over this!
Good detailed review...I really appreciate it. I was thinking of having it rapped over, like a dense flow, but I definetely want somthing over the top of it....
Ayyy,...I dont know what it is about this beat but man,....this had me listening all the way through. Yeah it repeats a bit but its all pieces to the song that would def be set off by a mc. I rarely hit up the mic anymore but if I was to rip a new flow I think this track might be the one to get me to do it! Kudos to you bro! P.S. if you would,...please send this track to me at:
conan_swanson@yahoo.com .....Im not promising anything but man,...id like to hit this up with vox myself.
I think it has a great foundation,...it seems to be missing something. What? Im not sure but I feel there is something missing. I think what you have going on already is pretty solid now all you have to do is build a little.
Whats good man?,...I had to hit this track up with a review! Everything sounds nice and clean. Diggin the vibe. I wish it was a little longer with a little breakdown or something to switch it up a lil other than that this is great!
Def needs a chorus. Sounds like the track is building and building. I was waiting for the chorus to come in. Needs a chorus for sure and mabey some sort of breakdown.
the chorus is supposed to be the part that goes "oh were going out tonight, you got me feeling right, etc." guess it's not obvious "/ I'm just about ready to throw in the towel on this one
I noticed you said to overlook the accent but,...I think it is tight. Gives you more words to rhyme in my opinion. I couldnt really make out too much of what you said,..I picked up about half of it though. Kudos to you on a very different and equally good track!
thanks for checking coney.. like i said man i wasnt making excuses for the accent just saying it coz i know some people arent open minded enough to give it a chance..
Nice track you got here man. I dig that bass line. Smoothness. The flows are tight as well. I like the la da da da daa stuff you put into the chorus. Kudos homie!
Man,...I really like your vocals. Your tones is right on! Id like to work with you if you are interested. I like to write alot of pop/rnb feeling tracks. Check out some of my work if you like.
Wow,..I didnt expect this from you. Well the roaring parts anyway. I think this should be classified as industrial or something of that sort. Kudos to you on a crazy track!
Nice,...kinda reminds me of Chevelle. But with a heavier vibe. Mabey some screamo type shht. i really like this man! Got my vote. The vocals really caught my attention!!! Good job!
thanks =D! for some reason i keep trying to add a comment to your songs, but it says i must be logged in, either way you got really nice stuff your self. thanks =]
Nice track. I really like the Gladiator vst. never heard of the purity one. Gotta check it out. I dig the progressions in this. Multi layered stuff is always cool as well. Nice catchy melody! Kudos man!
Cool cool! Good vibe! beat is raw the flows are solid.
I suggest a little stereo seperation on the chorus vocals. Sounds like the vox are mainly hittin up the left side. With the stereo seperation you should be able to get that fullness on the chorus that seperates the pro from the joes.
To propel the verse vox to the forefront I would try to lower the mids slightly on the instrumental and raise them on the verse vox. That should also raise the volume up a little without actually raising the volume itself.
I hope this review helps! Kudos to all on a tight track! If yall want I would mix it up my self if you wanna send the pieces through you already got my e mail!
Thanks for the input Coney. JDOT said you 2 have been communicating on this very topic. Let me know if I can send you anything. That's rad of you to get involved on this track.
Another cool track. Id like to work on something with you. Dont let all the rnb and hip hop tracks that I have posted fool you. I play guitar and have for quite some time now. I usually listen to this type of music when im wanting to just listen to music. Again if you are intrested in a collab with me hit up my e mail which is: conan_swanson@yahoo.com
Again nice track! I like your vocals. The instrumental itself is solid as well. I just wish you vocals were a little higher in volume other than that pretty stellar!
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please dont understand me wrong. i want to share my beats with ya...but people cant treat me like this way.
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I suggest a little stereo seperation on the chorus vocals. Sounds like the vox are mainly hittin up the left side. With the stereo seperation you should be able to get that fullness on the chorus that seperates the pro from the joes.
To propel the verse vox to the forefront I would try to lower the mids slightly on the instrumental and raise them on the verse vox. That should also raise the volume up a little without actually raising the volume itself.
I hope this review helps! Kudos to all on a tight track! If yall want I would mix it up my self if you wanna send the pieces through you already got my e mail!
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