TheAbyssBeatGuruJayP

yeah i'm sure you already know that the beginning sounded like trey songz but you kept it going and made it something different. i can tell you are a real musician. real smooth track right here

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

nice use of the sample. i wish i could do stuff with samples like that. i guess i'm just not that type of producer. you style is fresh tho man. keep doin wat you doin

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

the beat is a beast. loving the piano melody. the rhymes is tight just gotta deliver them better. other than that the whole thing sounds pretty solid to me.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

totally diggin the progression you used in this and the horn melody. keep doin what you doin mama and check me out sometime

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

i like this right here. the lil break down synth sound you used was hot. the melodies and harmonies are tight and i like what you did with the snare. i think i like this track so much cuz it sounds like something i woulda done. check out some of my stuff if you feel like it when you get a chance and keep doin what you doin

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

real smooth my boy. keep it up kid

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

This right here is one of the most unique tracks i've heard of yours. the beginning had me intrigued and when it dropped i was like daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayum. keep it up my boy

you went crazy with the guitars on this one my friend. good job. keep it up.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

hard joint right here. in my head i can sorta hear tupac rapping on this. i guess its the bassline that give it that tupac feel to me. good work man keep it up.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

You coming back hard on em wezy. Keep it going

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

i was all into the track until the rapping started. need a better mic my friend and try dding some feeling to the words you are saying cuz it just felt like you were just saying s**t and it was hard for me to pay attention. make me (and every body else) listen to what you are saying.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

"purdy south". my nig you need to run with that for real. that could catch on in a major way. ya flows is tight. keep doin what you doin

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

this is fresh to def right here cuzzo. i like that kick you put in there. that snare is so clean. and the organs was a beautiful touch. The bassline is killa as well. good job homey.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

This instrumental is amazing. I could hear this in a movie or tv show or something. the beginning sounded like it would be a killer beginning of a crunk track or hip hop joint. somebody should sample it. it would be a hit. good work friend

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

the beat go ham for real. keep it up cuzzo

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

nice beat. you need to bring the kick and snare to the front a lil bit more tho and beef em up so they hit harder cuz i can barely hear the kick. other than that i'm loving the melody and everything. keep doin ya thing

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

this beat is hot man. did you make that? Hard rhymes too my nig. keep doin ya thing

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

you always sound like you have great synth game in your rap tracks but you gotta come harder with your kick cuz the ones you use dont sound very rap

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

melodies are alright but the beat is whack and the kicks just arent hitting at all

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

ya melodies and harmonies in this is on point. synth game tight. and the kick is banging. you did ya thing cuzzo

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

definitely feeling that big TX sound you got going here. Dirty south is where its at. Nice use of the whistle too. nice work

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

nice crunk style fo sho. i like the applause you put in the back. that was nice. and i like the guitar type sounds you got going on. and ya brass is on point too. good track cuzzo

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

all right for on the spot i guess. at first i wasnt feeling it but when all the sounds came in i was feeling it. only thing i suggest is beefing up your drum sounds. other than that its good

Jay-P aka BeatGuru

i like this. its got that hood quality to it. i like the lil sounds in the background and the progression of the horns is on point. what program you using? keep doin ya thizzle cuzzo.

Jay-P aka BeatGuru