Aite the loops nice.... The Claps too loud and out.... Ouch!!! That bass needs to be turned down alot... The snare roll was a little bit off. The kick should be double layered in my opinion as well. But considerin ur jus startin out its a nice attempt... keep workin at it man
Aite im using speakers.. The drums sound on point! I like what u did with Obama's vocals on this... I would've changed it a little bit. Shortened his statements and added some scratches. Nice Battery!
I like this man!!!Rim roll was nice... the loop that started at 49 secs or so drew me in!! Dunno if thats right wordin on not but ne ways, nice vibes to this.... could rip on it
dts dem dusthill samples d man put fire up everytime i gotta concept 4 d song but no hook and made a preview listen to it n lemme know wat u think i cld open a verse 4 u on it
Are u the composer of the piano on here? If so Kudos!! I have that loop in my library from somewhere... maybe here idk lol.... but nice pad u put into it... and beat was good
I like this man.... Nice spit to it.... Liked how u used her piano loop and time and put it together... well produced... Nice flow to the track also..... I definitely could use you on the mixtape... Also check out my Desperate MEasures Beat... uses same loop by Holly.
I liek the ambient pad sound in the back.... makes it sound like your day dreaming off and then start rappin.... the kicks relaxin to.... reverse cymbals very good!
Man that bassline caught me from the beginning... then u kept bringing more elements to it.... definitely a good groove.... man i didn't even realize it was that long... i was jammin so much when it was over i realized it was 7 minutes.... Good track when u get lost in time with it.
Goood job on this EvRim!! You have a good folk/country type singing voice.... nice mixing and editing also.... very good. Mind if i can get and use the Chorus "I Walked Alone" part? If not its oK! Nice lyrics and song 10/10.
Not bad... gotta sorta spit fast to this joint... i would suggest changing the clap to something else... IS this using fruityloops drum hits? If so find some different ones... Other than that i like the pattern u did with it... keep on man!
i dont even remember if i used drums lmfao ummm i think its the kick i just made it loud as possible but i think i used one snare in this im not suree and yeaa thankss man! =]
I like this because its something different.... Not like the same sounds u hear all the time... definitely weird..... Listen to my "Others May HAte Track" thats my main different track i have... good job here though man... _Bones_
hey bones again ^^ yeah man that was one of my first collabs I ever did last year and one of my hottest I think really found the matchin vocalz to the melody I luv the overall feel of the track - thx for takin time to listen
Good job adding your own spin on it.... Different indeed... godo synth... i wouldve liked a deeper kick on it for my personal touch but good job man 10/10!
Thankx Bone for every kind word.
Yeah its a little bit to cheesy for some but I luv it! It gives enough space to flow with all the stuff in my/yours mind!
Of course anything you make, Im going to jump on and listen to... This doesn't disappoint... you have a vibe to your tracks that inspires... I wish you would just make lots of piano loops and violin loops and send them to me lol.... You are an inspiration!
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Yeah its a little bit to cheesy for some but I luv it! It gives enough space to flow with all the stuff in my/yours mind!
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