GHOSTthatcheR

like the work man, pretty tough track, nice as hell beat you got ont his one too bro, like how the (trumpets are they?) are used to finish the song, finishes it off real nice. keep up the work man.
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man, what a great track, such a beautiful hip hop beat, im just glued listening to this, piano is perfect and the strings are just great man. keep it up, always love what you got bro.
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wicked track man, love the work, lyrics have been written real well bro, nice beat man, the whole thing just flows mad as. nice work, real nice work!
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nice man, is that you on the lyrics? and bass? probably doing the whole lot aye!!! but man, this is nice, got that feel like i wanna see it in some dark bar, sticky beer stained carpet, and just people out and about listening to this on the back of their ear!...man, i would love this to start pumping in my dark beer stained carpet pub!!! nice man.
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tough as beat man, but the melody just keeps it at real chilled level and compensates it perfect. love the work man, nice one.
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maaaaad rythm man, mad mad rythm. relaxed but still got something at you man. you got some talent going with this one.
good stuff.
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man this is pretty wicked bro, like the arangement of beats. its kinda crazy, but all fits just perfect, love the piano kicking in too. mad....
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like how you've incorperated the guitar into this track man, good beat too. like the work, im interested in doing something along the same lines. good stuff.
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whats up, lyrics are great, but like dwightkeys said, maybe a little less effects, (you using a vocoder?) just be true to your natural voice. maybe just a small echo style or something at the end of certain words, just to make it fresh. great though, be true to yourself dude when it comes to your singing and have fun doing it.

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man, this music just puts you in a trance. i switched off and it just pumped into my head. almost as if it feels this is telling a story...its really got something this track, wicked work with the drum beats, really well prduced man.
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mad as man, wicked pads going on, love the way you have put this together. you have that softer section with some nice effects round 2:40 i really like, then man, this track just punches you right in the face!!! breaking out with a mega sick synth, man, this tracks good, its real good.

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well done man, i reckon your desription of the track is perfect. love the synth that you got starting it all up, getting your ear into gear! nice work man
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like it bro, real tough track, nice softer synths on the ear in the background, but its still right at you, love the synth round 3:30...nice!
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hell yeah bro, sick as stuff, wicked build up, nice bass going on, works nice with the beat you got. nice effects too, really like the work. well done
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wicked, nice build up at the start, then a sick synth with some nice bass, then break.....bang! more wicked synths man. love the work. nice!
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nice work, wicked percussion, nice beats all moulded together to get that cool pattern. its got a kinda street market feel, that ive seen around, if you get what i mean. like the work man, keep it up
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sick intro, just comes right in and hits you with a tough drum beat man, love the work with the answering machine, sounds mad as.
keep up the good work.
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man, real tight, lyrics and beat just flow perfect, this is pretty sick man. chorus is sweet, ya verse is sweet, its all good man, allll good!
keep it commin
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man, love the intro, great with the rain, and the violin. your lyrics are always strong and have so much meaning and strength to them. so intense and such a story you always have.
i love to listen to what you got man, always.
keep em coming bro.
ThatcheR

man, nice work, chilled track, nice sounds and good beat. great vocals, everything works real well. i really liked how it was put together. keep up the beats man.
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sweet as! love it so much, this has this real chilled environment, but its still at you with the beats used....nice synths end fx too, man this track is great.
keep up that good work.
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mad as, love the synth working with the guitar, and you got a mad ass kick going here too, sweet as.
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man, sick as hell, u got some tough riffs kickin on this track, perfect man, love the work.
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damn, wicked description, i love tracks that have a story to it, and this one, wow, is mad as. i can so see it in a movie or something, real sinister and evil, wicked violins seeting the mood. this is sick as hell.
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damn, what an absolutly beautiful song. i saw you replied to someone saying this was intended as a lullabye, perfect, i can also see it in a disney movie or something like that! this was really well written and produced, well done, great sounds.
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