realizet813

I like the way this one works out, it could make a pretty good song. I suggest putting the main synth up an octave though and lower its volume.

What sytrus preset did you use? Your transitions are good and I like how it switches between the 2 melodies. Strong use of filters and drum lines.

Good work! A little short for a trance track though.

Somethin's wrong with yo mix... It's all outta wack. Ya gotta turn down the kicks to a habitable level because they max out the level and ruin the whole mix in the end product, trust me I've had that problem before. Also, Your voice keeps going in and out like you moved to and fro from the mic during recording.

It's a good song, all I'm sayin is the mix is off and needs work.

My only complaint is that you should run the vocal sample through a radio type effect in a parametric EQ or something, it just feels too loud and despite grabbing your attention,makes it conversly hard to listen to as well. Other than that this is a great peice, Keep up the good work.

Where's the kicks? Bass? You gotta up the ante on that beat and add some real bass then it could be a hot track.