JHSF4Ever

San Jose, United States

Joined : 15th Jul 2016 - 9 years ago

Last Online : 26th Jun 2025 - 3 months ago

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JHSF4Ever comments on tracks

JHSF4Ever has posted 3 comments on other peoples tracks.

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JHSF4Ever 19th Aug 2019 06:02 - 6 years ago

on CUPCAKE by egerp

I am loving this. Excellent, hypnotic track. Your vocals remind me of Lo Moon (check out their single "Thorns" if you're not familiar with them) and while I agree they could be cleaned up a bit, your delivery is unique and stylized - nothing a good dose of self-confidence won't vastly improve. Keep your voice YOU, but try not to hide behind box effects. You sound great and the song is an excellent one. That's my 2 cents, I look forward to hearing more from you in the future...xo

egerp replied 28th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago

Thank you very much for your critics and appreciation. It means a lot to me :)

JHSF4Ever 19th Aug 2019 04:49 - 6 years ago

on There but for the grace of God by sedanchair

I like it a lot. Besides lyrics (and I can almost hear where the working title fits in the chorus), I think it needs to be shortened just a bit, and a bridge/breakdown about a third of the way through. I'd like to d/l this and work on it at a later date, as currently I'm between studios and lost everything in a fire. Starting over, and there's Soundtrap, which I will eventually utilize in the not-too-distant future. I will then have at it, if you don't mind. Excellent production, btw. Kudos...

sedanchair replied 19th Aug 2019 - 6 years ago

Cheers Matey. I hear what yr saying about a bridge/breakdown, that was what the bit at 2.56 was meant to be, but the original way sounded a bit too naff so I left it as it is now. Maybe needs input from someone other than me on how to go with this, always wanted someone elses input, but alas, been unlucky in that respect so far. It originally was shorter (I usually aim for 3-4 minutes, whatever tempo) but I tagged the build up at the beginning on, hence the increased length. I find tracks take on a whole different feel when the human voice is added. Stupid question time, is it lyrics yr intending to add?

JHSF4Ever 19th Aug 2019 04:23 - 6 years ago

on Jump - Original Mix by Axiles

Excellent. Production is on point & it's a strong, driving track. Kudos!

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