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ImproveWithError

Need more time to write and record
Lafayette IN, United States
Joined : 12th Nov 2008 - 17 years ago
Last Online : 1st Sep 2025 - 2 months ago
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ImproveWithError has posted 997 comments on other peoples tracks.

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ImproveWithError 7th Dec 2009 18:03 - 15 years ago

on Life in the Hive by Donicus
nice track, it has nice melody smoothness to it, nice job!!
Donicus
Donicus replied Unknown
Thank you for taking the time to review!
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ImproveWithError 7th Dec 2009 14:04 - 15 years ago

on Our Little Girls by iLLieSwitch
My first thought when I heard this song was WOW, you are absolutely amazing, what a voice man. I had to download this song, I rarely download, but this grabbed me. If you don't have a record deal then people are deaf. Everything about this song is great, you are an amazing talent, I am going to check out your other stuff right now. Nice work!!!!!!
iLLieSwitch
iLLieSwitch replied Unknown
Thanks a lot. This song really means a lot to me and I hope that it touches everyone out there just the same. Value your daughters, sisters, mothers and nieces. The world is ESPECIALLY dangerous for women now more than ever. By the way, congratulations! The First review got an exclusive download before the official release FREE! Much love and thanks for the support.
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ImproveWithError 7th Dec 2009 13:57 - 15 years ago

on Lost and found by Silentemper
Wow really nice job with this song, everything really came together nicely, every track within the song sounds great. Very nice job, adding this one to my favs!!!!!
Silentemper
Silentemper replied Unknown
Thank you for the kind response, and adding it to your fav's. Much appreciated.
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ImproveWithError 4th Dec 2009 20:49 - 15 years ago

on be ur self by amatox
This is a cool track, but I keep hearing a little glitch as if the loop isn't wrapped correctly.
amatox
amatox replied Unknown
yes it s true it s the drum beat it s broken if u know the radiohead the kind of drums they play I tried to make the same with some effects but I did make the drum less compressed all I have to do is to keep them normal that s why u hear like it cuts and come back after each 8 beats the first is like a death one, thanks for the comment I really like it man u are right about what u said
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ImproveWithError 4th Dec 2009 19:10 - 15 years ago

on Just a Prayer Collab with Ash by Marj
You sound very good when you sing, however I think your levels were a little too high and you sound slightly distorted, very nice voice!!!!
Marj
Marj replied Unknown
yep, sounds distorted because i tried to edit the result of the mic... it was way that bad before it was edited... anyways, thanks for the comment, i appreciate it...
God Bless,
Marj
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ImproveWithError 4th Dec 2009 18:52 - 15 years ago

on I'm Sorry by Marj
Great job on the vocals, the quality very good.
Marj
Marj replied Unknown
thank you for listening, i appreciate it... God Bless,
Marj
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ImproveWithError 4th Dec 2009 00:22 - 15 years ago

on By the Fire Tonight ORIG by CalifKen
Well...I think this is your best track, everything really comes together and sounds great. Very nice work, real good lyrics, keep it up man!!!
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ImproveWithError 3rd Dec 2009 22:34 - 15 years ago

on Two Worlds by Planetjazzbass
This is a really cool song, Eshar's voice is a awesome touch.
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ImproveWithError 3rd Dec 2009 22:10 - 15 years ago

on Cant wake up... by LisMarie
This could be a good song, but the reverb echo is a bit overwhelming in the song, at times its hard to tell what you are singing and it overshadows the music. You have a very good voice so I would let that be a little more natural, nice lyrics and good job actually putting lyrics on your songs a lot of people don't do that, personally I think vocals are the single hardest thing to record and get to sound good, it can be done even with cheaper mics in the 100 to 200 range. Keep up the creativity, you have a good talent!!!!
LisMarie
LisMarie replied Unknown
thank you so much
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ImproveWithError 2nd Dec 2009 21:12 - 16 years ago

on Hoping it's You by JensTonic
This is excellent very nice song!!
JensTonic
JensTonic replied Unknown
thanks for checking out this song too...
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ImproveWithError 2nd Dec 2009 21:02 - 16 years ago

on Stealing My Stuff by d2d
I am a sucker for slide guitar, very nice, I love this song, it would sound awesome with the right vocals. good job man!!!!!
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ImproveWithError 2nd Dec 2009 20:55 - 16 years ago

on Losing my senses by stianh182
Nice guitar work on this song, is this you playing? I like songs nice job!!
stianh182
stianh182 replied Unknown
thank you, yes the guitars are all me, the drums are programmed with addictive drums..
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ImproveWithError 2nd Dec 2009 17:31 - 16 years ago

on Consuming Me by jtarrant74
Hey, this is pretty good track, your voice sounds really good, the mix itself needs some work, maybe a different sounding guitar effect, and some other instruments like strings and bass, etc. I like what you have done so far, do have individual files for each track I wouldn't mind adding to it if you would like, can't guarantee anything but the song is similar to my own style.
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ImproveWithError 2nd Dec 2009 15:22 - 16 years ago

on PLANET OF THE AMPS by RonGallagher
nice guitar work man, you are really talented, this song could be arranged to have some vocals and really stand out a lot. Nice job well worth the listen.
RonGallagher
RonGallagher replied Unknown
IWE,
Thanks and love your tag.
My process has always been trial and error.
This one took awhile and it took a lot out of me, but this project has been very fulfilling as well.
The guitar track is a composite of 2 takes. Just riff like there is no tomorrow, start editing the shred from the worthless riffs and stitch the transitions together. Many folks hear a vocal and more concise arrangement. Great, maybe someday, but the purpose of the project was to find a particular bass tone unique to one Felix Pappalardi (Mountain, Cream, etc...). The resulting final mix took no less than 8 weeks to accomplish with dozens of variations on each element. I'll take what I learned and move on.
Your encouragement helps big time in this regard as I crawl back in the mix matrix, guitar in hand.
Voltage
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ImproveWithError 30th Nov 2009 19:13 - 16 years ago

on Sick Hip Hop Beat by usmanbbfl
I like this track, very nice bass to it, keep it up man.
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ImproveWithError 30th Nov 2009 19:11 - 16 years ago

on In G minor by DJTiberus
Nice track I like the strings a lot, what are you using to get that sound? Keep up the good work.
ImproveWithError
Nice track, real good sound quality, this would sound really good with some good vocals, nice job
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ImproveWithError 30th Nov 2009 14:08 - 16 years ago

on Provoking by theonetruebrew
This is a good song, I like the overall sound and melody, nice work keep it up!!!!
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ImproveWithError 26th Nov 2009 14:14 - 16 years ago

on Clouds of Jupiter by KDLproject
Wow this is great very out of the box thinking on this, I like it a lot keep up the great songs!!!!
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ImproveWithError 25th Nov 2009 23:07 - 16 years ago

on Prayer by tinphish
This is really nice song, would love to hear some lyrics with it, keep up the good work.
tinphish
tinphish replied Unknown
thank you for the review, i am revising this track, marj is helping me with lyrics and her wonderful vocals, it should be ready soon. :)

ash
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ImproveWithError 24th Nov 2009 17:19 - 16 years ago

on The Vision by Ablaze7
Nice Job, I like this track has a nice chill to it. Keep it up, going to check out your other stuff.
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ImproveWithError 23rd Nov 2009 17:42 - 16 years ago

on sad by profplum
wow nice track has real nice sound to it.
profplum
profplum replied Unknown
Thank you very much for the review
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ImproveWithError 23rd Nov 2009 17:41 - 16 years ago

on nocturne by kirkow
Cool track, I like the mellowness of it, keep up the good work
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ImproveWithError 20th Nov 2009 19:07 - 16 years ago

on Keep on pushing through; Global Ska Network by SLAPJOHNSON
Nice job this is a really cool track, vocals sound great!!!!
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Nice job this is real good song, reminds of an eighties rock ballad.
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