In my opinion, your choice of drums completely ruins this track. The melody, and chords sound good, but the drums don't sound like they're on beat & they just sound terrible. I'd either change to a better set of sounds, or find a drum loop to use instead. Not criticizing your work I'm just suggesting a little more effort be put out if you want to make some better productions.
This track is amazing. I remember I used to laugh when people said they make house music because I thought it literally meant music that you sit around the house listening to(which could be anything). But the piano in the intro was really awesome you should put it in a few more areas of the beat. The constant transitions were so perfect it kept my mind guessing on what would come next. Keep it up!
This is a very nice production. It sounds cool how you added that cinematic feeling to it. You need to lower the volume on the high melody sound you put on the hook because it's very loud even with my volume down on the speaker. That violin type instrument you put on the final chorus should be on the first one. I think you should add a bass line to this to fill in those blank spaces in the beat. Just implement those simple things & this track will be amazing. Also, check out my tracks when you get a chance & leave some feedback.
thanks man! and i agree the volume was a bit high especially for the melody hook lol didnt really take the time to mix it right. but will def put those things you mentioned to work! and will check you out as well! much appreciated!
This track is amazing. I love the melody that you came up with. With a little sit down & writing I could probably put some very meaningful lyrics on here. With your permission I'd love to try, and make something out of this. Also, if you could check out my track & leave some feedback I'd appreciate it.
Very rich vocals. This track has a very classy, laid back style to it. I'm not all that familiar with this genre, so I cant' say much. I hope to hear more from you. Check out my tracks & leave some feedback when you get the chance.
Thank you for the kind words and Ankit Sharda should also take credit, as this project couldn't have happened without his awesome vocals. The track is a mix of Devotional, New Age and Worldbeat, heavily processed and mixed :-)
This track is perfect man. I always love hearing laid back, melodic rnb productions that stay chill throughout the song. Honestly, it's perfect as it is right now. My question is what is the collaboration request for? Cause I think I could put a nice rapping verse over this beat(don't worry I do melodic rapping not the trash we hear on contemporary "rnb" music). Hit me back soon I'd love to work with you
This production is almost perfect. The only thing I'd suggest is adding an electric guitar to play some type of melody to rid the beat of that empty feeling it has right now. If possible, maybe bring the vocals out a little cause they fit well with the beat. You should really get some more vocals on here cause this could be a hit. Also, for genre you should put under psychedelic cause it fits that way better than electronic.
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hello :), yeah your right about the guitar i had the same idea but i just have no way of getting a guitar into my track so had to shelve that idea.
More vocals? we'll see.. maybe.
What do you mean by "bring the vocals out a little?" volume wise? or do you mean flesh it out and add more vocals?
Hmm yeah psychedelic seems to fit ill do that now! :)
This is a nice track. I actually used the same snare/clap loop in a project before. Anyway, I love the concept you chose for this track. More people need to understand what's going on here. You should check out my track "When I'm Gone", and leave some feedback. It's in the same concept as this song. Keep it up!
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This is a nice production. It has a real chill vibe to it. I don't know why, but the intro reminded me of a hospital scene from Spongebob. You did a great job here. Can't wait to hear more from you! Check out my tracks, and leave some feedback when you get the chance.
Nice Song. Won't Do Any Critiques Cause I Know From Experience That You Can Only Do So Much Editing To Loops. Great Production At This Point! Check Out My Tracks, And Leave Some Feedback When You Get The Chance.
Honestly I do not like this genre of music much, but your track just changed my viewpoint. This is one the best produced track I've ever heard on looperman. Every single instrument mixed in extremely well with the other. The only that could make this better at this point is some hardcore vocals. This entire production is just a masterpiece & I loved how the drums played out in the end to close out the song. New favorite most definitely. Check out my tracks when you get the chance, and leave some feedback.
The beat is lit! You should spend some time fixing the vocals. I don't know if it's me, but you sounded like you were rapping off beat in the beginning. And your voice sound really cloudy, and low. Take away the reverb, if any, and just add some simple delays & do natural rapping. Also, check out my track when you get the chance.
thanks for the help Billonz ,i touched it up a bit,removed the reverb and re uploaded it now,i checked out your whole page and i dig your style ,hope to hear more from you homie
No lie this song is lit man! I seriously suggest traveling to clubs, and having them play this song cause it's a banger. I wouldn't be surprised if I was in the car & heard this come on the radio. Your flow went extremely well with the bass. The beat itself is just bumping. You got a hit right here man! If you can make sure you send me the link to the music video when it's done.
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This track is amazing. I love that delay effect you added to the electric piano as the verse progressed. It has a real traditional 90s hip hop feeling to it. The song is very well constructed, and your instruments blend very well with each other. That bass is extremely catchy. Dope production! Also, check out my tracks when you get the chance, and leave some feedback.
Not All Familiar With Techno Music, But You Did A Good Job On This Track. The Drum Kits Were Well Produced, And Help Add Aggression To The Beat. Check Out My Tracks And Leave Some Feedback.
Thanks for the nice comment! :)
I am not really familiar with techno myself, but I listen a lot to Daft Punk, and I know that they make something like techno.. but its different then actual techno.
Nice Production! It's really soothing, and the flow of it is catchy. I don't really think the bass line is in sync with the chord progressions, but that's just my opinion. The snare shouldn't be filtered throughout the entire song because it doesn't sound right. It doesn't give that feeling of power in the hook. But it's still a good song though. Check out my tracks, and leave some feedback when you get the chance.
Very beautiful song. It's really soothing, and relaxes the mind. I believe it was a saxophone, or whatever that lead instrument was it was extremely well performed. The whole production is just perfect. You should really get a soulful sounding singer to sing over this track. It would sound so pretty(for lack of a better term). Please post more stuff like this. Truly amazing! If you don't mind checking out my songs, and leaving some feedback I'd really appreciate that.
What up Billions, MACK MAN here. Thankyou for such a positive comment. your understanding of music is on point, I have a feamale vocal for this track, just uploaded the instrumentle for now. I like your writing style, you have a creative edge. You must listen to a voriety of music to be able to appreciat this track. will leave a formal comment on your tracks shortly, had to lay it down. got to keep the eletrick on. Thanks again. PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.
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More vocals? we'll see.. maybe.
What do you mean by "bring the vocals out a little?" volume wise? or do you mean flesh it out and add more vocals?
Hmm yeah psychedelic seems to fit ill do that now! :)
thanks dude
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I, too, am not into this genre, but this track is a bit too calm for Rock, and not diverse enough to be Fusion, so Chill it is!
I appreciate the listen and feedback. Have a great day.
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I am not really familiar with techno myself, but I listen a lot to Daft Punk, and I know that they make something like techno.. but its different then actual techno.
will check your stuff :D
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