KnightHeir

Yo, dope beat. Sample is tight and nice drums too.

Nice, remember hearing the original growing up and have always liked the song. Your rendition is a pleasant surprise. Nice accompaniment.

To get better at making beats study the great beat makers. Rarely do they give away their secrets so you must study the beats themselves. After a while, their technique will start to become apparent especially with your own trail and error. A couple of my fav beat makers; Dr. Dre, 9th wonder, Ayattolah, Scott Storch. The key is to take pointers from the greats but still remain original. Best of luck to you.

Sounds good. Bass and drums on point. Seems like its missing some prominent strings to really make it stand out. Great job!

Wow, nice beat from such a young producer. Keep at it. Peace, 4M@

Crazy chill.

Nice, like the interplay between the melody and the bass. Nice work.

Well, it seems experimental, but still has the catchy quality that could inspire creative lyrics and a hot song. Remember most mc's feel comfortable with 8 bar hook, 16 bar verse section with intro, outro and a possible bridge. Also a name for the beat that came to mind while you were making it might spark the writing process. I would say overall good job especially for your 5th beat. Peace 4M@

Man, great music from a looperman legend.

There are some very interesting sounds here. Really like the first segment the most, also nice choice of drums. Great work.

Mix and master is pro level. Great sound!

Yo, Bxnner is pretty dope, thanks for posting.

Yo sounds dope, hope to hear your tape when it comes out.

The point that stands out to me is right when the beat comes in. Finding that sweet spot and getting a good loop is what I would do. You could add some variance latter with a bridge or hook section. It seems experimental which is good, but each transition has to magnitize the listener at least as much as the prior section unless there is a downtempo for effect. Just my opinions. Very interesting work.

This is dope, second verse is crazy. Nice concept, we need more rap vocalist on this site only a few on here. That's tight that you also have experience on the production side too. I've been mixing and mastering my own songs too starting in 2018. It really gives a sense of freedom when you become more independent musically. Good work.

Not an expert on lifi, but I do know what sounds good and this sounds good. Great job.

Love the MESSAGE!

Mix and master is clean. Message is clear. Nice work!

Nice work! Concept, beat and flow on point.

Nice one

Not bad for your first beat. Studying the great beatmakers with some trail and error to find your style is what i reccomend. Also upgrading your sound with high quality beat kits is another step. That stuff will come in time, good job though, keep working.

Yo, this joint is fire. Nice job.

Yo sounds pretty dope man, chill vibe.

Catchy joint right here. Dope beat good mix. Spitting getting better too, keep going!

For your first beat its not bad. As soon as i was going to type that it maybe was a little repetitive is when it switched up lol, somewhere around 1:30. Good job, keep it up.