maybe a really little change up in here would break up the song a bit. Such as "are you feelin what I'm feelin" maybe a change in the drums or the music or both, or i'll shut up now.
hey! the hook has a different timing but it works, cool!! I think I'm addicted to guitars, I just love guitars, I think they love me too but maybe they just don't know it yet. soft playing guitars, gentle playing guitars, acoustic guitars. not the ones that yell at me. lol.
If you are happy with it, i am happy with it. thanks.
first, welcome to looperman. i am certainly glad you had fun, most of time that's what i'm doing, keeps things very simple. love the clarity in the vocals here! sounds like live guitar, cool. thanks for finding my vocals worthy of your time.
yep, had to check out the rest of your stuff. so, late but, welcome to loooperman. you have mad talent! you already know that! and you are on the right track, you know that too! so all i'll say is: [humbly] hold on to it. keep em comin.
yep, made me move!!! again, why not gospel. this is wayyy hot! love it, love the fact that its gospel! love the gospel that thrusts right through hip hop. love that guitar!!!! love the vibe. love your accent! already gave you my thumbs for the cruxifiction track, so i give this one 8 fingers. there! awesome!!! please bring more of this.
just curious, why not gospel instead of hip hop? chorus definetely has a mj feel. singing and harmony is tight. drums kinda sound a little amateurish for this track, takes away from it a bit. love the concept and yes the rap is pretty soft, love it!!!!!!!!!! no need hollerin at people while spreading the gospel! three thumbs up, well, if i had three.
wow..thanks for the review. i really apreciate it. well it's hiphop cos its rap, also proud to be doing gospel but the gospel ain't music genre. its beyond that, i agree with you the crucifixion track. will def make the changes. the dude who engineered the session added a few things dat didnt quite blend with the music. thanks, glad you like it
well...i'm just a vocalist, but the beginning sounds a little iffy. once into the beat i'm cool. the key change "thingee" was super cool, but after a while it started to sound out of tune [or somethin], i like the idea of the [breakdown/transition] effect it seemed you tried to accomplish, just needs to [perhaps] be smoother. like the strings in the end, adds a smoothness in all the raspy guitar and choppy piano. definetely can be better, but a really good idea of a start! :-) again, i'm just a vocalist!
blues, rock, christmas, my birthday! it doesn't matter! its the voice, the subtly driving music with a guitar peeking its head in and out that make this great!!!! awesome guys! you make a great team!
the beginning sounds like "lets give em som'n to talk about". anyway, maybe the bass could come up just a tinch, it gets lost in there sometimes. but this is pretty good. i'm on a blues kick today.
blues is one of those genres that sometimes have to be listened to in a certain mood. this one reminds me of lots of cigarette smoke, a bottle of hard liquor, a round table, a little light hangin over it, and a sad sad lonely guy. [smile] i think your voice accomodates the mood of the song quite well, i mean, afterall its blues. you have the voice for this type of song. good guitar. thumbs up.
very nice interpretation. listened to this after Bass Mom's bass song so i had to turn the volume back up, lol. like the feel of this. like the organ, and the clarity of the vocals, nice job. need a copy for my car too. :-) pleassssssse, and thank you.
thanks, glad you like it, the track is available for download, and my email is grandfanali@gmx.com, send me a message, would like to get you on another track, the beat i have is waiting for u lol, once again thanks
you guys, this so wonderful. so beautiful! thats all that needs to be said. the words, the lyrics, the delivery, the music, all awesome. great great job!
hey! that's pretty cool! sounds like a real video game. also could be a soundtrack to something goin on in Scooby Doo, but i'll settle for the video game. well done.
not sure what it is, maybe the music is too loud, or too busy but its makin the song a little like a traffic jam. just my opinion. love the melody! vocals are cool. hook is cool. radio ready concept! love the creativity.
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hey! the hook has a different timing but it works, cool!! I think I'm addicted to guitars, I just love guitars, I think they love me too but maybe they just don't know it yet. soft playing guitars, gentle playing guitars, acoustic guitars. not the ones that yell at me. lol.
If you are happy with it, i am happy with it. thanks.
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I had A great review on a song of mine once that said he almost didn't listen to the track cause of the genre...and I'm guilty too!
But now I try to look beyond that and to the artist.
Thank you again M!
Allen
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Thanks for your thoughts.
-->appreciated.
j.a.
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Regards,
Kelly
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I'm happy that we can share our hearts and it be appreciated as much!
Allen
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