Thanks.....To be honest i had no idea...I would be composing..producing...recording...I thought that part of me was left under the water when I got baptized...now it's like I can't stop making songs....and the narrator is a producer from a radio station from two weeks ago I just added this segment to this song...
and if you are interested I'll loop you in a sing....not trying to be famous but what I'm doing is touching people lives and changing em as well...peace
you must be really proud of your son! the younger generation brings something awesome to what we already have and together a great piece of muzical art comes like this.
I am proud of him, he's got some nice ideas and it's great fun to collaborate with the kids. I've made music with all of them but he's the only one believing that he'll become a rock star. :D
Next time we meet he's going to do the vocal parts, replacing my voice so the mix will be different, but I'll keep your point in mind.
Again, thank you for taking the time and listen.
not sure what you mean by making it more sophisticated and complete, but i think the muzic has a sort of good serene feeling. i liked the rock guitar bit in there, not too overpowering.
the muzic with the vocals is still questionabl. kinda takes away from the calmness of the muzic for me. diff ppl are gonna get diff interpretations!.....so, if you aren't happy with it keep working on it! :-)
Hello Patricia, after 8 years of not hearing the track, I have to say that I now hear it with slightly different ears. The groove is cool, your expressiveness in the voice is simply heart-warming and suggests an enormous musical talent. I do not know what exactly you are doing musically at the moment, but under no circumstances stop it! You are a great talent and from my point of view your star is waiting to be discovered. One question is always who you surround yourself with in your artistic work and the music produced has a soul. Without soul and the corresponding heart in the implementation, it simply does not do justice to the beauty of life. Greetings to you after a long time and you always have a good time ~ Rockman
in the beginning i was like, where's the rock? i liked the intro, it made getting to the rock part more enjoyable. sort of like a great build-up.
also sounds jazzy (organ & drums), it also has a rather chill out feeling, and somewhat acoustic. def something easy listening! the rock part VERY tastefully presented! and that ending was like a cherry on top. well done.
i'm listening to this through headphones, but it sounds a little low in volume. turn it up and i think it would help with your delivery, or give some lyrics, or both :-)
for some us muzic is our passion, you can tell those who do it as a "hobby" and you sound sincere here.
if your gf loved it, then your mission was accomplished.
haha ya mission defs accomplished. Ya thats good to know I will play with the volumes a bit I might even re-spit it with a little more energy. Thanks for the input. And ya im very passionate about music if you want try listening to my song BROTHER SISTER its very emotional track.
Peace
Thanks! Im actually working on the lyrics for this track. Every beat I make, Its normal used by a Christian Rapper or Christian Singer locally, but i had to keep this one for myself.
hey! this sounds pretty good. you even threw a little rock in there. muzic flows nicely, didnt like the vocal with the fx, but the main one is very subtle and tasty. i think i would've ended it the second time instead of coming back in with the muzic, but its a very nice track! two thumbs up.
i really was expecting some singing to bring it into that "religious" state more.
as an instrumental it definetely is different for religious. i can hear a praise song for praise & worship. be interested in hearing what happens vocally.
Yeah this is actually a fast paced praise and worship song. I'm doing a colab with someone on this. When its complete and uploaded, i'll notify you. Thanks.
I am very grateful for your review. Glad you enjoyed. I heard something of his work and loved it. I was very impressed by the quality. Thanks again for listening and for download. / VlaRB
very very nice, mellow, i could close my eyes and get lost, but im not at a place right now to do so. however, i am DLing to do just that!!!!!! and slap rocks!
lol thanks, yea i was gonna post warning but I knew it would take the fun away from making u think u got like 5 pop ups and ur computer crashed LMAO Hey I have heard your voice on here a lot.... and if you see one my tracks you like (i know my tracks aint real "singy") at any rate would be cool to see if u could do something with one of them
well it sorta sounded kinda druken in the beginning, but ended up a pretty funky cool rockin hip hop track. got my head boppin. a very refreshing change from the usual hip hop...or is it hip hop? :-) i enjoyed it.
don't think ive ever stopped to smell "ambient" flowers, but as i sometimes do i am listening to featured tracks.
i really can't explain how this makes me feel, but it feels something like the title. i feel like (somebody's) angel and im picturing a movie with a love scene. or a non-shaved guy wearing a sleeveless shirt, lookin sexy in jeans, leaning on a transam, lighting up a cig. whoa.
its peaceful, strokes my ears gently as i listen and enjoy. i feel so at ease right now.
sorry if this all sounds "silly" but i'm typing as i listen and i like it! DLd for rush hour traffic. thanks.
hey really appriciate the kind words and hearing someone else's perspective on the song, sry it took so long to reply it seems i am to busy these days (something i swore never to be) :) the thought that someone out there listens to my songs is a warming one.
on On The Avenue by jimm57
i listened to it a couple times while reading threads and this mellow blues is alright with me.
on Super 4 GOD by Raimundo
love that intro! good flow. love the creativity included in here with the narrator.
and if you are interested I'll loop you in a sing....not trying to be famous but what I'm doing is touching people lives and changing em as well...peace
on Lemon Curd demo ft Kruus by Kikajon
you must be really proud of your son! the younger generation brings something awesome to what we already have and together a great piece of muzical art comes like this.
i await his version, great job you two.
Next time we meet he's going to do the vocal parts, replacing my voice so the mix will be different, but I'll keep your point in mind.
Again, thank you for taking the time and listen.
/pmk
on Leave me alone by Rockman
the muzic with the vocals is still questionabl. kinda takes away from the calmness of the muzic for me. diff ppl are gonna get diff interpretations!.....so, if you aren't happy with it keep working on it! :-)
on Solace by ngSBB
also sounds jazzy (organ & drums), it also has a rather chill out feeling, and somewhat acoustic. def something easy listening! the rock part VERY tastefully presented! and that ending was like a cherry on top. well done.
on Love Shot by whitemangoose
for some us muzic is our passion, you can tell those who do it as a "hobby" and you sound sincere here.
if your gf loved it, then your mission was accomplished.
"A" for effort.
Peace
on Trust in the Lord by Preach2k8
on Give It Up Ft MuzicIzMee4Ever by CONEYISLANDRECORDS
i like this much, and as i said to you coney, an MC on it would also be good. it'll also reach out to a broader audience as well.
either way this is good.
on My Fallen Angel by stephenfewell
on ATC 2011 CIR Instrumental 137 by CONEYISLANDRECORDS
nothing like a good hip hop track.
LOVE those horn hits.
vocals pretty well placed. good vibes.
on Rock Ballad by Preach2k8
as an instrumental it definetely is different for religious. i can hear a praise song for praise & worship. be interested in hearing what happens vocally.
good job.
on If I Aint Got You of coverMuzicIzMee4Ever by acidic
they seem to be in the same building, but on different floors.
great effort though.
on theFlight by VlaRB
started off with sort of an orchestral feel and eased right into a lovely rock feel. enjoyed the vibe & DLd for my listening pleasure. thanks.
on Lux Aeterna - Clint Mansell-Remake by us by AsphaltPride
very exciting and exhilarating, got the blood pumping! loved every moment of it from start to finish. thanks for sharing!
on StreetBlues - Bilbozo by Bilbozo
very very nice, mellow, i could close my eyes and get lost, but im not at a place right now to do so. however, i am DLing to do just that!!!!!! and slap rocks!
thanks and great work!!!!
on windows GOOF by Codemiester
When this first came on I thought my computer was going crazy, turns out its you! lol. Thats really creative of you. pretty cool. :-)
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on Shes My Angel by mrck1z
i really can't explain how this makes me feel, but it feels something like the title. i feel like (somebody's) angel and im picturing a movie with a love scene. or a non-shaved guy wearing a sleeveless shirt, lookin sexy in jeans, leaning on a transam, lighting up a cig. whoa.
its peaceful, strokes my ears gently as i listen and enjoy. i feel so at ease right now.
sorry if this all sounds "silly" but i'm typing as i listen and i like it! DLd for rush hour traffic. thanks.
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on Rock this groove by RichieWinn
this is really great. creatively done. great quality. took me back to roller skates, tube socks up to the knees with stripes, and a good time.
DLd and mentally fav'd. great job! thx. Richie. :-)
Richie