Love it. The echoing voice in the background sets it off, she shines! I like the end, it's connected to the rest of the song, but somehow it also seems differently disconnected, if that makes sense. Lol Good work!
Thanks my dear friend Patricia... I am thankful for your comments and you are right there is somewhat of a totally unexpected disconnect at the end. I plan on making another version later where the two will be connected nicely.
I am glad that you love it and thanks for the fav :)
Very interesting track. Nice.
I really like the "pop-iness" of it.
It's fresh and light.
(I know what I mean by that but I can't explain it. lol Sorry!)
The vocal/voice you used...nice choice!!
Very interesting choices of everything you used here,
everything works well together.
Thanks, Patricia sorry I didn't forget about working with let's connect. my contact info is on my website or if you want me to text you send me your number through my secure contact form itsmichaelmayo.com/contact
Every note is just awesome and heartfelt.
I can feel the emotion in this as it moves me through every transition.
I am standing and applauding at all 5 minutes and 24 seconds of this!
Suuuuuuuuuuure they can.
I wrote a song about it. :-)
This is really good.
So lively.
I REALLY love the jungle feel!
All the places this took,
and good thoughts I had.
Reminds me of an old tv show
Miami Vice. :-)
It's overall a great track.
Miami Vice, lol, now you are dating me in a time zone eh? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pHiHqEFkUkU
My Influential band, and a throw-away (Flesh & Blood Album) song they gave to Miami Vice.
And Angels... (sigh I´m not going to get into it... let's just leave it as it is, as an awesome muse for artists)
BTW, I do remember your song... The Alzheimers has not hit me yet...
Cru
You weren't lying when you said heavy drums and guitar. Haha
Nice and laid back for sure.
For rap it's probably perfect.
For a singer, maybe add another variation to keep it fresh.
I like it! :-)
There is something in there that is making it sound very busy.
Maybe the tambourine? Or the congas/bongos?
3:44 sounds a little less cluttered.
Very nice!
Bring the volume on the keyboard up to blend more with the drums.
I would say the vocal as well, so they are mixed.
I'd like to hear the piano more. :-)
Nice vocal.
I think it can be mixed a little better so the vocals blend more with the muzic, but maybe that was intentional? :-) Very nice and creative track!
First question...what is JEET KUNE DO? :-)
I would love to hear the muzic and vocals compressed so they will blend better,
at least the vocals.
Love the muzic, nice and lively.
Heeeeeeeyyy there NNDAP!
I hope all is well.
Your muzic has such a great soul jazzy vibe with a dash of that ole time gospel!
Loving it as always.
Turn that volume button up a couple notches.
Hope all is well!!!
Chilled out Psychadelic Soul...[looks at it sideways]
Haha it is not "traditional" (whatever traditional is) which makes it more appealing.
I read that again and slapped my hand for writing that word when speaking of muzic. Hehe
The vocals give it an even greater flare!
It helps make it dreammmmmmy.
It's good!! :-)
on PLAYGIRL BY AAP FT LEO VALENTINE by djphildrummin
You wanted it to sound nuts...I think you've accomplished the mission. :-)
on She shines by ronabo
I am glad that you love it and thanks for the fav :)
Ronabo
on Fun Strummer by toddlove
I really like the "pop-iness" of it.
It's fresh and light.
(I know what I mean by that but I can't explain it. lol Sorry!)
The vocal/voice you used...nice choice!!
Very interesting choices of everything you used here,
everything works well together.
on Taco Tuesday With The Martians by ClickbaitCabaret
No swamp issues here, no sir.
Everything sound good and clear.
on The smell of rain by Zivonmusic
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on CXRTER - Out My Mind Ft Xbrodie by swansea
That is all!
on Scared to be lonely by MichaelMayo
on Celthyan - I See The Battle In Your Eyes by cCelthyan
I can feel the emotion in this as it moves me through every transition.
I am standing and applauding at all 5 minutes and 24 seconds of this!
on On The Way Back with tighter mix now by DijamMusic
Love the energy and good vibes!
Thank you very much for the feedback.
Glad you did like it.
on JaniMilfsson SWAY by djphildrummin
Good job on the muzic. :-)
on Angels Cant Cry by crucethus
I wrote a song about it. :-)
This is really good.
So lively.
I REALLY love the jungle feel!
All the places this took,
and good thoughts I had.
Reminds me of an old tv show
Miami Vice. :-)
It's overall a great track.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pHiHqEFkUkU
My Influential band, and a throw-away (Flesh & Blood Album) song they gave to Miami Vice.
And Angels... (sigh I´m not going to get into it... let's just leave it as it is, as an awesome muse for artists)
BTW, I do remember your song... The Alzheimers has not hit me yet...
Cru
on Patricia Edwards-Better Ronson123 Dance Remix by Ronson123
Love the dance version.
Very nice!
on Guitar Knights by SunnyKinght
Nice and laid back for sure.
For rap it's probably perfect.
For a singer, maybe add another variation to keep it fresh.
I like it! :-)
on Dark fog by jackpad
Maybe add some muzic or beat variation(s) to switch things up a bit.
Lots of room for vocals to be creative. :-)
on Post Malone x Wow Prod By Dranel806 by Dranel806
Nice beat to this.
on Espanola by Ronson123
Maybe the tambourine? Or the congas/bongos?
3:44 sounds a little less cluttered.
Very nice!
on Patricia Edwards-when-you-fall-in-love by Dceve
I would say the vocal as well, so they are mixed.
I'd like to hear the piano more. :-)
on Let Me Take Off Your Shose by Joseph50
on Mosestone ft PowderJay Ship of Love by Mosestone
I think it can be mixed a little better so the vocals blend more with the muzic, but maybe that was intentional? :-) Very nice and creative track!
on Aint Nobody Lovin Me But You by blob2
on YOU ARE MY WORLD by BLACKIE1726
I would love to hear the muzic and vocals compressed so they will blend better,
at least the vocals.
Love the muzic, nice and lively.
on SOMETHING ELSE by NDAPOCKET123
I hope all is well.
Your muzic has such a great soul jazzy vibe with a dash of that ole time gospel!
Loving it as always.
Turn that volume button up a couple notches.
Hope all is well!!!
on Pure Bass by ASpekto Remix by neuromancer56
Haha it is not "traditional" (whatever traditional is) which makes it more appealing.
I read that again and slapped my hand for writing that word when speaking of muzic. Hehe
The vocals give it an even greater flare!
It helps make it dreammmmmmy.
It's good!! :-)
on HARD TIMES Featuring Patricia Edwards by laurentwirz
Loving the 3:20 mark.
And that guitar at 1:50, yes.
Very nice.
1st of all thanks a lot for your comment!
Thanks and i highly appreciate your comment as well it makes me happy you like it.
I love your voice and work!!
on Tu hai meri kushi by yunusk66
Very nice vocal by Emkay13d2.
Love it.