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hey sakura, i like this, if i were you i`d get some vocals on it but most importantly get someone to remix and master it, the song starts out with that dirty distortion guitar and that`s really cool but at :16 that clean guitar comes in and it feels like a different song the levels were totally different. I didn`t feel like that transitioned well for that fact. Also the drums are severely muffled when the distortion guitar is playing but super clear when the clean guitar comes in seems to me the distortion guitar takes up too much space. Did you double that track with a bit of reverb and that`s why it squashes everything else? and the ending is very abrupt. Other than those few little points i do like the tune itself and do believe with a little work it could be a hit.

This is a great song, i got a Black Crowes vibe from it and yes it`s a great vocal you got in there. I`m not so sure about the falsetto though but that`s probably just me.

this is just what i`ve been looking for hope you don`t mind i`d love the chance to add vocals too it but i`d probably cut the jazz part out, this is one cool tune. PM me through my site if you`ll let me add vocals.

hey allergyboy this tune rocks only prob i had was the female vox, i don`t know if it`s the wrong key or i just don`t like the voice , anyway the rest of the tune is smokin the male vox kick ass and the flow and power of the song rocks.

well that was cool once again this is not my kind of music, so i`ll comment on what i appreciate and that would be that you have quite an ear as in your mixes are mastered with perfection the sounds i hear in your music are immpecable.

well this was very interesting not particularly my kind of tune but i did appreciate the drum transition kept me in there.

now this i like, damn it`s good .

well that kinda sucked , i figured with a provacative name like that and an angry fucking comment to listen and the fact that it is listed as metal, i was in for a real treat to some angry hateful metal but all i heard was dan akroyd this was more than crappy it was a complete and utter waste of some good metal listening time .

hey scott this is very cool , can`t wait till you get it finished, the drums are a perfect fit for this track IMPO.

damn scott this is excellent very satriani like, i love your guitar playing.

well this takes creepy to another level, very well done.

nice one, some avril licks in there, sounds good to me, too short, yup.

hey scott this is kick ass, i have to say i loved it right away, i had to download it and hopefully with your permission i can do something like add drums, bass and vocals to it.

sorry tyler i wasn`t trying to get you upset just giving a little critique also when you center all instruments you cause yourself alot of equing probs because your mid range will be too heavy and have little space to work with, did you not notice that the one guitar part in your song only plays on the right side. that in my books would mean it was panned that way or was a mono track loop but being panned that way is more likely.also i would have PM`d you so other people don`t have to read this but you don`t accept PM`s

hey tyler, this is a great concept song, i love what you have going on but i found the placement and panning of the instruments
to be off quite a bit, your transitions were spot on though which i liked.

i think i know now, your loops you used were already panned when you used them, yes i think i know what i`m saying, in a song when i can only hear the rhythm guitar part all on one side(right monitor) then obviously it is panned to that side, so i can only assume the loops you used were already panned that way.

excellent track and loved the vocals too but found the mix buried the vocals at some places, a little bit of work to bring vocals up and i`d call his a hit.

wow your 2for2 in my books so far this is quite heavy i love it too.

this totally rocks, excellent vocals, i loved it .

hey man that was cool i liked the tempo changes and hey nothin wrong with mixcraft, i have a ton of expensive gear but also added beatcraft to my drum VST`s collection.

damn man this is double wicked.

very nicely done, wicked groove.

very nice track what you mean no talent on your part, it takes talent to put something that sounds like that together.

yup that`s a nice groove.

i liked all the songs of yours that i had time to listen to but like this one the most .

when are you getting signed this is wicked.