It sounds pretty good. If you can make a dry version out of it I can see if I can fit it into the track. Or if you want to try it out yourself its ok as well. Hope you can get the rough edges out. Your voice is pretty good so it could work!Only the main melody synth is pretty clear and hard. Lets see if we can somehow mix it together with your vocals.
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