yep, melody is good, i have not heard of The Sparta unless u mean the movie Spartans, then hehe
but i think the whole concept of the track if good. just work on the mastering btn the melody and the drums, will really help freshen this track up!
nice bass, i like the chilly drumming on this one. the switch into the horns made it amazing. i could study with this track u know, and into the height as the horns evolve. amazing!!
respect!
glad you hung in there till the horn section.. thought it wud add a nice punch...dead please with the way this one turned out. cheers for the feedback.
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lol, like mad outrageous. and i can c what u mean by releasing stress. i really wish i could finish this track lyrically with a lil busta rhymes funny feel. will keep in mind and c what i can do.
lyrically man, respect, u are good.
impressed. really. solid beat production, nice vocals and lyrics and amazing mix. total respect. actually this track made me log in so i can show some respect to u. well done
classic!, wouldn't u consider getting a biiiigg midi keyboard and linking it to ur pc so u can record ur amazing tracks fresh?? it would be nice. i am looking forward to collaborating with u.
a good start my friend, a really good start. this being ur first uploaded track is does very well for an intro, i feel the bass play there. and the pitch bend and break it sick. good start. keep em coming.
one pointer on this lovely melodious track. the beat is higher than the vocal, the mix btn the vox and the beat i mean, turn the beat down a bit, actually turn all the other ones down and keep the piano in, then work a lil bit on the EQs, then u are done!
nice work by the way
this is a mix btn reggae and something like hiphop. slow strong flow. the reggae part is coming from the bass and the way u talk.
i like it man. good work. and oh, the mix is good, vocals and beat. pro stuff i would say. respect
DustHill, Dust, answer me this question...
Do u feel u are growing in music? i personally think u are man. this track sounds deep and good quality.
subtle elements are tight. the woods are cracking the beat.
and the piano man, always, good as crazy. do u have the piano loop up here? maybe i would try something with it when i have time.
good work man, respect
dextdee! cuzo! appreciate your review bro iz always sumthin special and real talk. thx for that.. and as I already told you I thougt about that one question few days ago and came to my mind that its the people like you which make me feel "growin" cause all of you influence me with your kind of music or tips /chat however and I luv that so I kinda get inspired without even noticing it! one looperman fam! greetz over to china! cheerz dusty OH and no I didnt release that piano loop yet officialy but if u wana try sumthin with it you can always hitmeup on msn.
darn, i am feeling the vox on it, and darn them kicks are crazy with the boncas. i can c y thezerit is feeling it. another version of what he also does. man respect on this one.
i guess today ur style of music is really suitable for my mood. i am ill. (cold) and nothing is doable but somehow ur tracks. like this one, is giving me more interest. great work man.
respect
i really appreciate it. im actually sick right now 2. but im glad that my effort in music can make a person feel better. im serious man that makes me feel like its all worth it. alot people believe that its a waste of time. but not me. patience is a virtue. but at the sametime cant wait around forever. thats why i just stay on my grind because i know it will pay off one day.
sickness, i am digging the flute and them sitars or whatever they are at the intro and in the track. the lil minus is the sytrus vocal u used. i think if u get a richer one or by tweeking it, it would blend well. but still it is not p. keep it oldskuul man
this is crazy nice. respect
i created this track using fruityloops 3.56. i wasnt good at tweaking when i first started out. but i've been doing alot of experimenting and reading on how to. the intro instrument i think was some kind of african percussion instruments, and some kind of guitar with a sound effect added to it.
nice mix up. i think u need to give some credit to loopeytunes in ur description if not in the title.
i am also doing something with the same loop and it is different from urs. i am just amazed at how the mind works. ur version is a killer ill track man. like Aj is doing, it could be wonderful. a hardcore dude spilling his heart on it emotionally too could do as well. i love it. respect.
i feel you. i am thankful for the loop loopeytune uploaded. i'm thankful for this site period i love it.when i make the description i try to make it short so people wont have to read alot. i think i actually told em thanks already and to check out the song.
nice vocals man! and the beat is good too. my lil chip in. as the song goes further, u can increase the speed of the drums. that way u can still keep ur listeners on alert. nice work
hey Lendy, actually ur name sticks out in my head because i watch Dexter a lot. son i like ur flow, somehow it is making me smile.
u got lots of potential. with ur voice if u perfect ur flow, it would be as original as ever. and as for the beat. it does well too. who made it??
also, i heard u do a small blow sound with ur mouth, man! let me hook u up on those things, use an effect instead of ur voice, it makes it closer to being pro. and with ur rap, get it all together organized, redo this thing and u got yourself a master piece. truly, i feel the potential in this one. this is about the longest comment i have ever given i think, whew!!
respect on to u!!
thanx alot bro your the 3rd person since i've been doing this to give me a positive feed back.I really appreciate it.i workin on my flow and work some local people who are willing to work with me.As far as the beat i got from shadowville i'm reg to the site and i added a few things to it to give it my twist. i since have ventured into making my own beats.i'll post one up the one i am in need of that clip i did it my self but will still change it to the one you have. Is it you in the clip?thats even better if it is. i'll end up changing it and adding it as the chorus to.thats where i got the name from.you'll see check it out.and i up loaded another song as well.peace Lendy Len
yet another good one, but then the panning is still bleeding on the left ear. and there is some noise of a machine in the recording. i think u should check ur sound card.
as for the beat bro, it is very good. get umm... ASIO4all and sett the bit-rates to about 512 or the best for ur pc, it really helps clear ur sound. i like them.
damn!!! i am feeling the beat like it is hearing my heart. who made it?? and for the flow, it is like u are throwing darts from ur mouth onto all the listeners along with the beat. bro, sick emotional flow. digging it like crazy. total respect on this one!!
yo dust, this is a lil different from the usual. but the kicks and hast stayed the same, and the rolls too. still has the element of dusteee!!!
kinda alternative rocky too.
keep em coming.
dextdeeeeeeeee thxx alot for the review yay u right its a lil different from the usual gotta make some more moody beatz cause I keep getting depressed when I work on sad piano all day long haha feel me keeepup cuzo ceerz from swizzzy to chineeeezy from dust heeeazy
hahahaha, lmfao, dolawhite, u are the funniest rapper i have ever heard on looperman, and ur voice compliments it. i live this track. s**t talkin'. hahaha. i like it. i might as well listen again. reminds me of ur other track, "u broke my cherry..."
this track is mad solid, the level of the vocal and the beat is ok! i think all u need it to take out the mud and that is a plat track. the chorus is awesome!. respect on this one!
wow!!! u blew and caught my attention!!! like the word wow is not enough, this is a classical combination with rnb, wow!!i am speechless. totally impressed with ur first work i have ever heard.
seriously, this is something out of the blue. respect on this one
Thanks, I sent this song to Taxi for evaluation and got average mark as much as 7 from 10,
they told me to improve a musicianship and make a lyrics more personal to get more r&b feel.
on THIS IS SPARTA! [Work in Progress] by EnkiDubstep
but i think the whole concept of the track if good. just work on the mastering btn the melody and the drums, will really help freshen this track up!
DextDee
on Sheltered (Alt. Mix) by Shardlow
respect!
DextDee
The Alabatross Guild
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lyrically man, respect, u are good.
DextDee
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DextDee
Thanks for the review!
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nice work by the way
DextDee
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i like it man. good work. and oh, the mix is good, vocals and beat. pro stuff i would say. respect
DextDee
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respect on this one guys, all worked out well.
DextDee
on Now I Have Forgotten Instrumental by DustHill
Do u feel u are growing in music? i personally think u are man. this track sounds deep and good quality.
subtle elements are tight. the woods are cracking the beat.
and the piano man, always, good as crazy. do u have the piano loop up here? maybe i would try something with it when i have time.
good work man, respect
DextDee
on Speak On It by YourzTruLee
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on The world is yours by WISDOMOFKMERC
respect
DextDee
on On Track by WISDOMOFKMERC
keep it coming, i have liked what i have heard so far..
DextDee
on Keep On" by WISDOMOFKMERC
this is crazy nice. respect
DextDee
on Rock Star by WISDOMOFKMERC
i am also doing something with the same loop and it is different from urs. i am just amazed at how the mind works. ur version is a killer ill track man. like Aj is doing, it could be wonderful. a hardcore dude spilling his heart on it emotionally too could do as well. i love it. respect.
DextDee
on planet beats n bass by Oleclub
DextDee
Try to improve my tracks in the future
Greetings from Seville!
O-le Club
on PENALTY by lendy
u got lots of potential. with ur voice if u perfect ur flow, it would be as original as ever. and as for the beat. it does well too. who made it??
also, i heard u do a small blow sound with ur mouth, man! let me hook u up on those things, use an effect instead of ur voice, it makes it closer to being pro. and with ur rap, get it all together organized, redo this thing and u got yourself a master piece. truly, i feel the potential in this one. this is about the longest comment i have ever given i think, whew!!
respect on to u!!
DextDee
on and away we go by v5i5n5c5e5n5t5
as for the beat bro, it is very good. get umm... ASIO4all and sett the bit-rates to about 512 or the best for ur pc, it really helps clear ur sound. i like them.
DextDee
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on One Last Thing To Do Instrumental by DustHill
kinda alternative rocky too.
keep em coming.
DextDee
on King Cracker by dolawhite
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on Oblivion- non vocal mix by Dj4Real
ooo, it is from fusion room huh, nice. not bad at all, actually too good :D
DextDee
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seriously, this is something out of the blue. respect on this one
DextDee
they told me to improve a musicianship and make a lyrics more personal to get more r&b feel.