GhostRhyme

It's definetly a funky groove, I like it. Great soundz, breakz are positioned in the right places, like the variety of instruments used, Pretty good stuff, keep at it buddy...

I'm really feelin dis beat fa-sho, I'mma write some barz fa it if you don't mind, and when I'm done I'll let ya hear it... Keep doing that shyte buddy...

I'm feelin dis one fa-sho, it'z laid back, but I got barz fa it though... It'z coo the way it is, but like da only thing different I can think of to do with it, is to maybe have some bass breaks in your drum loop, make da bass more rich, and deep... It'z coo da way it is though, keep that shyte up...