You need a lot of work but your on the right track i can hear it in your words but remember when you rapping think of your kids. it works better and it enables you to push on and be better. Your far from great but your nearing good. Keep hustling and don't give up. I know how you feel losing loved ones. its hard but the road your heading is worse but its worth it in the end. Much love. Peace and i borrowed drums from one of your loops ill send you the link to the final piece.
You nearly there i suppose its good not great it has potential to be great like yourself. i can hear like bashing and more like its not composed or timed. But its really groovy your nearly ready for big time so ill make a proposal we can work together if you want I'm not a genius i just love music and i have a gift for it. so if you want we can become bigger if we work together. msg me on "" or on Facebook William Lomaloma i might have something for you that i can't finish so you can help me out. if you want awesome. keep working hard your nearly there.
Thanx 4 stopping...but I am not a singer, I am a songwriter. If you had taken just a minute to read other comments, you would've learned why it was posted....the sentiment! To judge one fairly it must be in there element...and in my element of writing....the song relays the emotion, and the growth of the character in understanding how naive he has been toward his partner! In keeping with the true purpose of the song's intent! I still appreciate you giving me your time and sharing!
Pretty cool dudue...real cool...so yeah im going to download it and make it big here where i come from dont be surprised you might just make it.....cool but needs some work to be to fast to put things up....like your tracks take time to perfect it make it sound really good so people will love it not just like it cool...
Commented on Run Right Past by pacosferreira
really nice bro hope you added words to it???
Commented on LENDYS IS BACK by lendy
You need a lot of work but your on the right track i can hear it in your words but remember when you rapping think of your kids. it works better and it enables you to push on and be better. Your far from great but your nearing good. Keep hustling and don't give up. I know how you feel losing loved ones. its hard but the road your heading is worse but its worth it in the end.
Much love. Peace and i borrowed drums from one of your loops ill send you the link to the final piece.
Commented on Diaries by MGproduct
You nearly there i suppose its good not great it has potential to be great like yourself. i can hear like bashing and more like its not composed or timed. But its really groovy your nearly ready for big time so ill make a proposal we can work together if you want I'm not a genius i just love music and i have a gift for it. so if you want we can become bigger if we work together. msg me on "" or on Facebook William Lomaloma i might have something for you that i can't finish so you can help me out. if you want awesome. keep working hard your nearly there.
Commented on Upstairs by TuneDef
Music is great singer sucks you killed the track sorry but get better awesome.
Commented on XyIlent - Glide by XyIlent
Pretty cool dudue...real cool...so yeah im going to download it and make it big here where i come from dont be surprised you might just make it.....cool but needs some work to be to fast to put things up....like your tracks take time to perfect it make it sound really good so people will love it not just like it cool...
Commented on Modnex - Great Memories by Modnex
awesome stuff.....cool beat