Some of it sounds really good but there are, some harmonic mis-placements
in the vocals the keys are playing minors and the voice is doing majors, that
maybe the other way around, never the less...
You've put the loops together well, but the vocals have a problem in the
harmonic story they tell...Truth be told...
So what do you suggest I do to improve the vocals? and oh, I m must say that it has been a great honor to work with your vocals and i think we may need to be in touch more often because I may use them for some commercial purposes. You can always send me an email here: eliaslebogang2@gmail.com to discuss the terms. I'll upload some of the tracks for you.
Like it for the most part - vocals from beginning to about 1:24 are effective and work well. At 1:24 they go off key and the verses don't fit as well as they should. Might consider removing the verse and using the vocals as texture. Just my take - others may see it differently. It's very difficult to marry these vocals. Overall very good effort but maybe more groove less narrative.
-clindsay
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in the vocals the keys are playing minors and the voice is doing majors, that
maybe the other way around, never the less...
You've put the loops together well, but the vocals have a problem in the
harmonic story they tell...Truth be told...
Peace...TG.
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-clindsay