Pippa777

The track is good guys.
It is a bit "commercial" but I think that was the intention.
The mix is polished enough.
Now you just need to put some vocals on it.
Good luck!
Ciao, Domenico

PS: I see from the past comments that you had one of the most beautiful voices of this site visiting you ... but I am sure you have already checked out the pellas section looking for inspiration so you already know her.

We are hoping people will just have a go at the chorus and see if they can do anything with it. We do not have any particular pattern in mind so just really wanted to give everyone an idea of the song (what the verses will be about). The words I put were just an example for the theme. if you think you can make some thing on it then please try and let me and pip see what we think. Think you might want to have a go? Cheers

Anomaly J, It's an moving one about trying to make it to the top against all odds. In the same molde as Emimen lose yourself or 8 mile Road. About trying to lose the demons of past life to give it one big shot and when there what it might be like.
Looking for a chorus which just bounces with Synth.
Think Pip wants the words Live it up. So adding to that something along the lines of "Live up it, fine that line lets hit it up, dont ever give up not the time to hide, time to say thanks for ride, win them all over to live it up." That jsut sprung to mind however peeps might get the idea of what I think might be needed. What you reckon Pip?

Very catchy track. Smooth and easy to listen to. This would be perfect with a good vocal track. Keep up the good work.

Cheers,
Franco & Scott

I really like the piano piece, very melodic.Sounds like it could belong to an 80's movie soundtrack! Good job!

Excellent piano work! I also love the 80's synths you put in this piece. Job well done all around! =B-)

This is really good. Agree about the bass and a little acoustic guitar would really add to it. Knock out song with some vocals here. Well done.

Very nice! Loved the piano.

Listening to this reminded of any 80s movie where the the boy was chasin the girl to catch her before she got on the train bus plane whatever. Lol
That's dope very original .

really nice tune you have here!

There's a song by Bo Bruce called Save Me, I think those lyrics would go really well with this track. Nice job!!

Nice vox

Good song. I see you are looking for collabs... would you like getting a bass line for it?
Ciao, Domenico

I like this a lot! Draws you right in

Really nice chilling tune with great dreamy sounds, nice melodies, like it!

Very nice. Some vocals would be great.

this track needs a good mix, I would start there first to see how to improve it, I like it though!!!!!!!!!!!!!!