Listened all the way through. For a first run on new gear, this holds up better than it has any right to. The opening ten seconds sit low and steady, nearly holding their breath, then it lifts in steps and the drop lands around the 25 second mark. Smart move: the loudest stretch is actually later, around the 50-60 second mark, so the demo gets a second wind instead of spending everything on the first drop. And the levels keep shifting from section to section, which is what keeps a 90-second sketch feeling like a song instead of a loop.
One honest note: the ending gives way fast. The last second and a half steps down to about a tenth of the previous level, so it lands softly rather than stopping. If you want a hard finish, one more bar of that quiet tail would lock it in. For now it sounds like a door left open, which suits a demo. Keep going on this one.
on DEMO WORKS by MrsBickford1979
One honest note: the ending gives way fast. The last second and a half steps down to about a tenth of the previous level, so it lands softly rather than stopping. If you want a hard finish, one more bar of that quiet tail would lock it in. For now it sounds like a door left open, which suits a demo. Keep going on this one.
on DEMO WORKS by MrsBickford1979