This is getting there - a great start. I thought the beginning had a 'breathy' feel so if it was me, (and it is you, not me, so might not be your bag, as such) I would add some soft breathing or sighing noises to add depth and mystery - but I am 50 per cent of Kayos2, so that really isn't surprising!
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