I have to say this is a really well made track. Any advice I would give has already been given by the other 2 comments. I love the structure and the energy of it so keep it up.
I listen then always times here purely, look however thereby not on the names, because I want to hear unprejudiced and either something says to me emotionally, express you to it or it also nothing happens.
Well, and now I have landed again with you. So I like it. And that, although I am truly not a rave fan. But as already with your "Silver Guitar" the song is naturally rather not harmonious according to its genre, but in itself - at least according to my feeling - quite.
Composition and sound quality are basically successful. But the share of the very beautiful and convincingly embedded female voice in the overall song is not coherent; that should be structured a little differently. Place the first 45 seconds (vocals) again in a later part of the song; and in such a way that the instrumental passages are somewhat smaller in the overall ratio, respectively the vocal parts are somewhat larger, and the song thus becomes a bit more balanced.
Yes, it will certainly become a little longer, but that won't hurt: On the contrary!
A bit strange now with me: although I really have no access to this kind of music, I like your conversions but quite. Probably actually through - as already mentioned - their inner harmonics.
Thank you for your feedback. I wanted anyway to reworke it because it doesn't sound exactley as intended. Thanks a lot for the inputs. I will take them into account. This helps me to improve myself.
Really nice track Fidiu, i like the melodies on this creation. I like the vocals and the synth work because they sound really good together, Good work!
I am very, very quickly annoyed by too many hard beats, which is why, for example, Hip Hop, RAP is an abomination to me. And often I have the impression that this sometimes becomes an end in itself and uncounted pieces from the genre are completely faceless and thus absolutely interchangeable.
With your piece - yes, I know it's not RAP, but it also has a lot of beats - that's not the case at all. It fits! It fits from the beginning to the end! And the "silver" guitar? is really "terribly" beautiful! This "silver" decorates the entire piece so beautifully that I get involuntarily a friendly, harmonious, slightly smiling face when listening to your track, because it touches me.
The so-called dark elements are there and I feel the same way as you. On the one hand, after a certain time, the piece has basically "called" for it, so to speak, on the other hand, I am just as uncertain regarding their concrete nature.
But this uncertainty does not affect the overall result for me; and that is extremely successful!
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad that you liked it. I think I will keep that kind of dark brassy sound. Maybe I will refine it a little more to blend better in the mix.
Hear the song and immediately there are dreams of summer vacation ^^ Very nice song.
Great production and well mixed.
Could indeed be a little longer :)
Hi, there! Thank you for taking time to give feedback on this production. Well, maybe you can put it on repeat and enjoy it longer :)). Anyway, I will think about to make it longer. Thanks again for the input.
Wow, Fidiu! Definitely summer vibes from this track! Great production. Really clean mix, with everything sitting in its own place within the frequency spectrum. Really nice work on the vocal. You didn't mention who did it, or where it came from. The instrumentation and vocal worked perfectly together to provide that summertime feel to the track. I honestly have nothing to suggest by way of constructive advice. So, I think I'll just close off this comment and listen to your track one more time! :)
Hi, Eric! First of all thank you for your positive feedback.
A few years ago you also gave some really positive feedback on my first track here (Echo feat Romy Harmony) which inspired me to improve myself a lot. I'm not there yet but I'm learning with each project that I'm working on. All the best wishes and thanks again for your nice thoughts. Regarding the vocals, I bought them from a specialized site but because of the rules here, I cannot post it.
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I listen then always times here purely, look however thereby not on the names, because I want to hear unprejudiced and either something says to me emotionally, express you to it or it also nothing happens.
Well, and now I have landed again with you. So I like it. And that, although I am truly not a rave fan. But as already with your "Silver Guitar" the song is naturally rather not harmonious according to its genre, but in itself - at least according to my feeling - quite.
Composition and sound quality are basically successful. But the share of the very beautiful and convincingly embedded female voice in the overall song is not coherent; that should be structured a little differently. Place the first 45 seconds (vocals) again in a later part of the song; and in such a way that the instrumental passages are somewhat smaller in the overall ratio, respectively the vocal parts are somewhat larger, and the song thus becomes a bit more balanced.
Yes, it will certainly become a little longer, but that won't hurt: On the contrary!
A bit strange now with me: although I really have no access to this kind of music, I like your conversions but quite. Probably actually through - as already mentioned - their inner harmonics.
Many greetings
Seelengold
Thank you for your feedback. I wanted anyway to reworke it because it doesn't sound exactley as intended. Thanks a lot for the inputs. I will take them into account. This helps me to improve myself.
Best regards,
Fidiu
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Thanks for your kind words.
Best regards,
Fidiu
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now right: Hello Fidiu
It´s late... -;
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then times completely spontaneously from me:
I am very, very quickly annoyed by too many hard beats, which is why, for example, Hip Hop, RAP is an abomination to me. And often I have the impression that this sometimes becomes an end in itself and uncounted pieces from the genre are completely faceless and thus absolutely interchangeable.
With your piece - yes, I know it's not RAP, but it also has a lot of beats - that's not the case at all. It fits! It fits from the beginning to the end! And the "silver" guitar? is really "terribly" beautiful! This "silver" decorates the entire piece so beautifully that I get involuntarily a friendly, harmonious, slightly smiling face when listening to your track, because it touches me.
The so-called dark elements are there and I feel the same way as you. On the one hand, after a certain time, the piece has basically "called" for it, so to speak, on the other hand, I am just as uncertain regarding their concrete nature.
But this uncertainty does not affect the overall result for me; and that is extremely successful!
Kind regards
Seelengold
Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad that you liked it. I think I will keep that kind of dark brassy sound. Maybe I will refine it a little more to blend better in the mix.
Best regards,
Fidiu
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Great production and well mixed.
Could indeed be a little longer :)
Best regards,
Fidiu
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Regards from Ottawa,
Eric
A few years ago you also gave some really positive feedback on my first track here (Echo feat Romy Harmony) which inspired me to improve myself a lot. I'm not there yet but I'm learning with each project that I'm working on. All the best wishes and thanks again for your nice thoughts. Regarding the vocals, I bought them from a specialized site but because of the rules here, I cannot post it.
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