shepbird

Love the textures of those guitars at the beginning. Not used Reason in ages. This is giving me the itch to (yay for gear acquisition syndrome)

Bitcrushed clap after is really cool after the first 16 bars (at 0:29 it sounds like). Kick is too shy tho. Idk why but I'd want something harder

Those hats that get louder at like 0:48-0:49 are something I'd want to hear earlier on too (maybe like 0:42-0:43; basically like 8 bars after the kick comes in). Sorry to sound like a broken record, but I love the textures (& your sound designing in general). Are these all Reason rack devices at work for your sound generation & processing?

Last thing that caught my attention is dynamics related. I'd want to see some more filtering of kick in & out. For example, kick filtering out (or even being removed for a bit) when snare rolls from 0:55-1:08

GREAT WORK MY FRIEND ! this could become a great song if longer, for sure!

I like the song brother ! feedback? well it depends what you want to know and I'm sure the guys and gals here will say a lot , just specify my friend!!!

Great contrast between the sections with vocals/acoustic guitar, and those with more distorted/industrial sounds. That distorted guitar sounds very good.

Great song for a movie or video game ! i like it ! good vocals

This reminds me of Zombie by The Cranberries - real nice heavy instrumentation and lovely tune

Lovely drums and dreamy quality

Amazingg!

Very nice track overall man !!! Moody and cool !!! Cheersssssssssssss !!

Very nice! I like the lyrics and vocals a lot, and the bass really sets a mood.

Cool squirt lol really potential to be a good track :)

Beautifully ambient - some things do not need words

Great vibe.

Cute little piece - v enjoyable - the acapella reminded me of Richard Shekari's work

Great work.

Weird, but cool