DarkArtz

Banging beat and love the robotic echoey vox yes, finish it please

The bones are there for something pretty special. You need a bit more business in the background, something that goes through the whole track and brings it all together. Vary your percussion a bit more, like a bright snare halfway through to move everything forward, and a nice percussion motif woven throughout to add a little bounce. I like the little slightly-off plucks, you could build on those with a different instrument to add even more variation. These are all ideas, but for me the most important aspect of music of any kind is the story it tells, and this has the potential to tell a great one.

keep going i hear potential

V Pleasant - sort of thing I use when I need to be chilled to concentrate

You are doing good keep it up and coming and more variety to the songs next time.

Definitely. Really enjoyable track!

great

NICEEE!!

very nice

Awesome very deep and kinda tense.

I could help ya with that
That's if your using Reason
Ill send you one of my tracks
Siphiwe.kula@yahoo.com

good music

nice :)

yo,,,,

amazing!

poli dinato!!

I likey!