I like it, but you absolutely have to change the pad/chorus melody because it's wrong, the harmony isn't right compared to the violin's, which is perfectly fine. I recommend using the first four notes of the violin melody and making them the same length as the ones I used for the chorus, instead of the ones you used. It will sound good like this. Then I would add drums and vary them in some places for 4/8 bars. If you change these two things, the beat becomes impeccable and not bad at all.
on Shade by Molebatsi0Moisa