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Sounds good! Try playing around with adding some more layers and distinct sections, but I like it!

I'm not the best person to comment, since I'm still learning. But even though hip hop isn't one of my favorite genres, I like the rhythm and I think it keeps good time. I hope the knowledgeable people here can help you improve.

A bit like an upcycled Tubeway Army track I like it

It sounds fine as it is - you could add some electric guitar pieces for twists and turns but you don't need to

Nice track!

Nice profile picture lol.
I think this beat is good as it is.

it sounds great ! try vocals with your voice or someone from here.

Egypt movie type beat