vapormist

Why are there no comments here?
It's a very cool track

A great tune - maybe find a cool, pop acapella and add it in, with one or two more changes and an extended fade out

Ok first this has a quality. No offense no heart. But it has possibilities.. that's a good start. In my humble opinion. Heart is within you and it's upon your shoulders to deliver a captured slice of 'possibilities'. Rhythm, pocket, groove. 3 6 9 as Tesla would extol. Rhythm frequency and vibration. The universe is within us all. Instincts are helpful. Manifest away...

I would work on the drums and bass, the main samples are not bad

my 2 cents for what its worth. maybe a slower morph starting @ 0:52 and have the beat pulse even more at 0:57 so its different than the first drum part with some type of side chaining perhaps?... if not really like it. well done.

I enjoyed the listen, well done. Personally I would boost the highs of the lead and key, to me they sound a bit dull, like an EQ taking away the brightness, but that's a matter of taste.