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Wow the first one??
My compliments and im sure you will have much much succes because when i look to myself when didd make my first track.....i laugh so hard on my self that i tought it was nice. Tell me...how its possible that you do this so fast and i needed years .You are a supertalent i think or i am superslow lol

A very promising start - I like the section at 36 seconds in and the splash of angelic vox u have here. As this seems to have a bit of a reflective or romantic vibe, I would add some strings, ideally with a vocal, just before the end. Kay

Hi!
This track is very catchy ... that opening guitar is a cool 4 chords ... later on, the song builds up very well, but after a while it becomes boring ... maybe if you shortened it or brought in another chord progression or built a chorus, it would be better ... you could also think about a short instrumental solo ... and of course a nice little vocal would be the icing on the cake because the musical base is excellent ...
congrats of course ...
fistbump,
Danke