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salvatoreJ

salvatoreJ

Brooklyn, United States
Joined : 22nd Sep 2024 - 1 year ago
Last Online : 11th Nov 2025 - 4 hours ago
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TheFrenZ
TheFrenZ 2nd Dec 2024 21:16 - 11 months ago

on Before My Eyes by salvatoreJ
This comment took me a while :-)
I really like the song, but like Kay0s writes, the vocals come late.

Remember: I am not a musician but a hobbyist so please take that into account with my comments.

It seems like the vocal verse fits less well than the chorus, the sung C# to C sounds a bit strange to my ears, different Keys?

Spice up the 1st and 2nd 8 bar part of the buildup:
I got your song to my pc, imported it into REAPER, then added a new track with FX delay (4x 1/2 note panning left/right and fading away) + Native Instruments VST Raum with initial preset, in that track I stretched a piece of vocals from the acapella up to 20 times from bar 27 to 41 (1 bar silence at the beginning) and used it as a drone with a long fade-in and -out, on top of that in the same track a few single words from the acapella verse, the delay runs down to bar 45. This gives the silent part some extra body and punch, everything quietly and that massive delay, like vocals from far far away, that as a preparation for the verse without disturbing the beauty and power of the 3rd 8 bar part of the buildup.
Result: The relative silence is broken and the singing, even if only fragments, starts earlier.

I hope I have not offended you with my comments but that they are helpful.
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 5th Dec 2024 - 11 months ago
Hey, Frenz,
Nice meeting you,,,, let me add i never would be offended and appreciate expressing your thoughts...

lol, I fast tracked rushing and missed things. Gonna start over ...;
Kayos2
Kayos2 1st Dec 2024 14:35 - 11 months ago

on Before My Eyes by salvatoreJ
you are becoming more adept at Dance music - I love the production standard of this track - only suggestion I have, would be to bring in the vocal a little earlier, maybe around 1 minute into the track Kay0s
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 1st Dec 2024 - 11 months ago
Hey VN, NO BS here,,,, working in this for hours and hours and posting,,,,, woke-up listened and said something is off............... then read your suggestion,... thanks.......
glennwhite6504
glennwhite6504 30th Nov 2024 14:40 - 11 months ago

on I Should Love You by salvatoreJ
Hello SalvatoreJ.....I think you have a great dance track here. This would fit into just about any dance scene, it has super good vocals....excellent percussions and effects that move the experience the right direction and overall a sound made for the dance scene. It a very good track my friend.
NateJMusic
NateJMusic 30th Nov 2024 05:56 - 11 months ago

on I Should Love You by salvatoreJ
Such an amazing record!!
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 30th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Hi Nate,
Thanks for the listen and thumbs-up.
SalJ
Kayos2
Kayos2 29th Nov 2024 11:55 - 11 months ago

on Belong by salvatoreJ
This is a really brilliant Dance number - you had an inspired thanksgiving! Did you make this after the meal;) Love it
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 30th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Lol,,,,
Before, During, and, After..... when in the zone gotta stay.
Adding Vocals Soon

Thx Sal
djphildrummin
djphildrummin 29th Nov 2024 07:53 - 11 months ago

on Belong by salvatoreJ
#DEFINATEBANGER REAL 90s JOYOUS HOUSE FEEL. I EFFN LOVE IT. GREAT WORK.
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 29th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Yes Sir,,, Thanks my friend... maybe the young ones will incorporate sounds..
Kayos2
Kayos2 20th Nov 2024 12:22 - 11 months ago

on Scouts Honor Update and fixes by salvatoreJ
The vocal is good and the beat and tune is, too. My only observation, is the bridge between the slowed down beat and picking back up the original faster beat seemed a little too long. I think if the beat is slowed for too long, the dance floor empties. That's just my slant but overall, a very promising track. Kay0s
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 28th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Hey VN, Totally agree and questioned areas but rolled anyway... time vs life and hell of allot of slices to make it work and sorta fit,,, lol..... made changes and suggested...... I know im over in the intro,,, lol.... thx, S
DarrenHirst
DarrenHirst 20th Nov 2024 09:59 - 11 months ago

on Scouts Honor Update and fixes by salvatoreJ
I love the dance track its cool.
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 28th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Thanks Darren,,,,
RichardShekari
RichardShekari 20th Nov 2024 09:16 - 11 months ago

on Scouts Honor Update and fixes by salvatoreJ
Looks like DJs are gonna love you
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 28th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Hey Richard,,,,, lol, at best like. much respect either way, I rolled with the NYC heavy hitters as sound engineer !. most moved onto producing....
Kayos2
Kayos2 19th Nov 2024 10:35 - 11 months ago

on Dont Be Afraid Extended Full Version by salvatoreJ
The vocal is great under the music - are you going to extend this - would be a great dance track then
Kay0s
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 20th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Hey Kay0s,,, Thanks my friend..... Yes, The seven minute dance is ready and hot.
was first feeling this place out, had a very bad experience here ten+ ago. keep looking and/or ill try to notify when posted..... this one track per day is bla.

Thx again, Sal
RichardShekari
RichardShekari 19th Nov 2024 06:45 - 11 months ago

on Dont Be Afraid Extended Full Version by salvatoreJ
This is dope, Salvatore.
salvatoreJ
salvatoreJ replied 20th Nov 2024 - 11 months ago
Hi Richard,,,,, Super thanks !
The Full version soon.... New here and still feeling place out.
It was monitor admin bully-bad hijacked 10+ years ago and split...
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