this is mad fire, that intro is too dope. i wish i remembered what thats from... the 'used to' melody...
anyways, when you came on rapping, initial thought is mixing/engineering.
i think you need to work a bit on the effects you put on everything and how they go together..
i also do believe the beat choice (instruments, mainly) is maybe not the best for what this track is
with all due respect
youre on to something, thats no doubt
much love yo
-CAP
yo thanks man! i appreciate the feedback and the comments. I'm really looking to improve on the mixing part of things just cause I tend to finish tracks so fast. Actually looking for people on here that can help with the whole producing part so I can focus more on the writing and rapping.
Sounds cool, not bad. I noticed that the center of the stereo image where the vocal resides is busy. Maybe some mid side eq would help. There are some plugins that work center stereo from waves is a good one, just to lower the center a little to let the vocal breath more. Otherwise ok, keep rockn.
beautiful open harmonies. i'm enjoying entrance of kick now. it is really a beautiful mood you create. and an unexpected dropoff at the end! (as if you are going somewhere further with that?) keep up the neat track!
You know that old record sound, that's all over the track...
After a while it just destroys the true dynamics of what you
are trying to get across...
To me it sounds like a cheap Compressor, opening and closing
every time a sound passes through...Make me nuts to listen to it...
A good start of a track. The synth/sample fits well to the beat. But it needs lots more variation. The only thing that is changing is adding closed HH. To keep it interesting you should change the beat and snares every now and then and add a hook or something. Also add another synth/instrument to make more out of it. Good luck1
Trill beat. Smoking one as we speak. Pretty nice lyrics too, could have a bit more punch to it but nah like the level it's at now. Trippy. Keep it up. peace
This is decent track.The beat is definitely good,i like it,got that emotional feel to it.Your delivery is good too.The mixing on the vocals can be improved though.It will be a good joint once you have a hook on it.Make the hook emotional too.
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anyways, when you came on rapping, initial thought is mixing/engineering.
i think you need to work a bit on the effects you put on everything and how they go together..
i also do believe the beat choice (instruments, mainly) is maybe not the best for what this track is
with all due respect
youre on to something, thats no doubt
much love yo
-CAP
But thanks again!
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After a while it just destroys the true dynamics of what you
are trying to get across...
To me it sounds like a cheap Compressor, opening and closing
every time a sound passes through...Make me nuts to listen to it...
Other then that, it has potential...
Peace...TG.
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This is a brilliant track.
Great job.
Jamid
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