nemoplays

Love the heartbeat rhythm and piano effects - I would say add a melodic layer somewhere and some bells in the middle - great musical pace

I'm very new to this, I've only been creating music for 6 months, but here's my humble opinion: add more layers to the melody and accompany it with chords that mark the rhythm. Balance the drums by giving more presence to the bass and the kick, and give the beat some air by breaking up the drums and creating small silences.

My dear friend , please believe me that I don't have the time, I'm already more involved than I should be with this hobby. I am so sorry I can't help !! And I'm not even the right person... because things have changed and as I already told you, my taste has the influences of another era !! I wish you the best and yes, it's definitely worth trying as hard as possible ...!!! Best Regards !!!

It is pleasant, lively and melodic !! Obviously you want to develop it further. My taste is old-fashioned so... I insist on the shape "chord progression / main melody line / secondary melody lines / variations etc." I wish I could help more !! Cheerssssssssss !

I like it so far - I would add some elec guitar work but that is just me ;)

Hello nemoplays, there's a possible beginning of a much bigger piece of work that will lay out a middle and ending, it has the potential to be a special piece of work.

Hello nemo ! Very nice , I am almost sure you are thinking of developing it much further !! Cheersssssssss !

Oh dear nemoplays, you should complete this song. It is a wonderful start what you have done up until now. Ideas will come. Day by day, no rush. You'll be amazed with your self and this tactics. You know really well how to make the arrangement and this is important. Very very helpful.
Best wishes, Anthony

Cool intro for a powerful chill/pop/rock song ... have you thought about continuing?
Fistbump,
Danke

OMG that piano, simple but beautiful and then a powerful beat - love it

Hello nemoplays, this is very interesting and quite a calm to the water effect....real pleasant and cool

This visual glitch is very usual but not a real problem indeed ! Nice and cool track - well done !! Cheersssssss !!

A cool piece - very chill - please can u extend

I like the beat - this is unusual but compelling

Nice little piece - great choice of sounds

Weird and wonderful

Hello nemoplays, interesting track, I as well feel like the tension builds at the end and the percussions play into it in a way.....I like the effects also, I think this is a pretty good piece of work.

Strong feeling of movement in this and tension mounts well towards the end

An intriguing interest track with lots of potential - I would say it is more in between Hip Hop and trap than Disco. Parts of it sound a little bit saturated - I am no expert but some of the levels sound a bit too loud. Could do with a couple more changes. It is slightly cinematic - it has a dark vibe, so maybe work more with that genre. A good foundation to work with.

Hello nemoplays.....gotta work on this , it has potential. Take some time and sit back and think out a true piece of music.....there are possibilities.

I can imagine u walking thru trees with the shafts of sunlight hitting flint between the treetops - a lively, pleasant piece

With expansion and vocals, this could be something really cool - a great start

So you seem to propose two loops to be worked on to a lo-fi song. Not bad at all. It just needs the song writer to choose the right lyrics and vocal line to the productive work of making it a song.
Keep up the good work.
My regards, Anthony

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