great song dude. awesome songwriting. very talented. the only thing i could suggest to make it better would be to tone down the rythm guitar just a little and your song will be perfected. :)
There's quite a few "worst towns" in the UK - Luton, Hull and Reading are always near the top. I shudder to think what the shit end of a shit town looks like.
Stylistically the song reminds me of Graham Parker, but slower, or the melodic moments of John Cooper Clarke, without John Cooper Clarke. It's interesting to hear a conventional, classically-structured pop song on the internet. The chord progression in the chorus reminds me of "To Earth with Love" by Gay Dad (e.g. "just to walk away" vs "hills I cannot climb").
My first suggestion is that you cut the first twenty-three seconds, because they are the same as the next twenty-three seconds. Move the bridge somewhere earlier than 3:00, because it deserves to be heard. Aim to fade out by 3:33. The ending is a bit weak. Then again, I would probably smother everything in strings.
the beatles rock and so do you! good tarck reminds me of a guns and roses track but i cant think which one. i am not really into rock but i am sure if you get your tracks out there you will soon have a fan base. i could amagine this track being played at a stadium on a sunny day. over and out
summer is over and slap is back!! missed your music, missed your loops ....
you think right: this track rocks!! classic style rock for "tho whole combo"....;-) most of all I love the songwriting (cool harmonies and clear structure) and the brass-section, that's something I really miss in many new rocksongs .... and naturally I totally agree with the lyrics!!!!
Commented on We buy them still Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
great song dude. awesome songwriting. very talented. the only thing i could suggest to make it better would be to tone down the rythm guitar just a little and your song will be perfected. :)
Commented on The shit end of town Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
There's quite a few "worst towns" in the UK - Luton, Hull and Reading are always near the top. I shudder to think what the shit end of a shit town looks like.
Stylistically the song reminds me of Graham Parker, but slower, or the melodic moments of John Cooper Clarke, without John Cooper Clarke. It's interesting to hear a conventional, classically-structured pop song on the internet. The chord progression in the chorus reminds me of "To Earth with Love" by Gay Dad (e.g. "just to walk away" vs "hills I cannot climb").
My first suggestion is that you cut the first twenty-three seconds, because they are the same as the next twenty-three seconds. Move the bridge somewhere earlier than 3:00, because it deserves to be heard. Aim to fade out by 3:33. The ending is a bit weak. Then again, I would probably smother everything in strings.
Commented on We buy them still Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
great songwriting,the guitar could use some db more,good brass.record this in a studio and its radio matirial.
Commented on When you feel it; Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
This is awesome, solo was practically perfection, was a very involving song.
Commented on We buy them still Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
the beatles rock and so do you! good tarck reminds me of a guns and roses track but i cant think which one. i am not really into rock but i am sure if you get your tracks out there you will soon have a fan base. i could amagine this track being played at a stadium on a sunny day. over and out
Commented on Sweaty cleaner man; Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
I love it!
Coooooool!
Commented on Randy Candy; Saxobones by SLAPJOHNSON
i like the way you used that sax & the beat was pretty nice too. exellent track!
Commented on With the guitar. Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
Loved this one.. the brass does lift the track.. Love it man....
Commented on With the guitar. Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
summer is over and slap is back!!
missed your music, missed your loops ....
you think right: this track rocks!!
classic style rock for "tho whole combo"....;-)
most of all I love the songwriting (cool harmonies and clear structure) and the brass-section, that's something I really miss in many new rocksongs ....
and naturally I totally agree with the lyrics!!!!
good to see you back m8 ....
peace, rei
Commented on Megalomania Jump the Q by SLAPJOHNSON
You are what I would like to be most like. You got it together my man. Got me looking for ALL your loops now. Thanks