Rockman

HHello HeathAlexander, I would like to thank you for your constructive criticism. You're right. The vocal line is not on point with the music. Unfortunately, the reason is that all the music was put under the vocal track afterwards. This is extremely difficult with some vocal tracks because both the singer and the composer, arranger and producer act at their own pace. Unfortunately, this difficulty is clearly heard on this track. However, I think that you can still see that both players are passionate about the matter. In a life situation there would be no timing fluctuations or "parallel worlds". Even if the singer would have sung to the composition afterwards, there would probably have been no timing problems.

Best Regards ~ Rockman

Hi danke,

thanks for your constructive comment! I guess you are right! The song will be more interesting with a chorus - perhaps with some strings or an other instrument in connection with the vocal line.

Best Regards
~ Rockman

Hi Danke,

thanks a lot for your comment! I guess you are right. - Less is more ;-) I let you know, if I´ve composed a second version of the vocal line.

Best Regards ~ R.

Hello MStokes,

many thanks. I´m very happy about your positive comment. Best Regards, Rockman

...many thanks : )

Many thanks : )

...thanks a lot : )

Rockman

I´m pleased to hear it. Your vocals are an inspiration ever.

Best regards, Rockman

Hi Darrell,

thanks for your comment to the track "How many times".

Best Regards, Rockman

...many thanks to you :-)

Hi AllenV,

many thanks for your comment. I´m happy, that you like my work with Patricia. I hope, that she like it too ;-)

Best Regards, Rockman

...thank you.

Many thanks for your comment. It makes me happy, that you like it :-)

Many thanks :-)