hey man! this is amazing. I'm a female singer in the works of an EP. your track is really amazing and I would love to write lyrics and put them with this track! would that be cool?
Thank you so much for your kind words on this record. Right now this track is supposed to be written by a rapper which was not my first choice. But I would like to hear what you would do with it also. Maybe also possibly I wouldn't mind helping you with other material for your EP. If you have any recordings of your voice, I would love to hear it.
this is a awesome track,nice flip in a way..but for some reason i find Anna Kendricks voice irritating to the ears,.but other then that i like what you got here
Well, I definitely liked it! :) Very danceable. Since it is a draft, I think you might experiment with changing the synth pad which has a relatively high frequency content to something that has more content in the mid-range frequencies. I think it competes with the vocal in the track. Or, I guess you could try applying some EQ. But, I like the way it swells. Gives a real feeling of movement to the track. Beat works really well also. I'll be interested in seeing how this evolves.
Yay!! I am 25 and should love the crap on the radio but my most listened to album is Fleetwood Mac's Greatest Hits- no joke. I've listened to this cd so much but unlike every other cd, I never ever get sick of it. Whenever one of their songs comes on the radio, I get so happy!
So anyway, I love this remix and the vocals are awesome too. Sounds like Ciara- who is it?
Man Timmons, you are bringing it with this one. As for getting a vocalist for it, I think Carole (if she has the time) would be perfect for this one. Not only does she write great lyrics, she sings like an angel. And she can sing in several languages so she's the perfect candidate for this one. Here's the link to her profile:
This one is a 10 the way it stands, adding vocals will take it up another notch. I'll check back to see what happens. As I always say with your work Timmons - OUTSTANDING!!! I hope all is well.
Thanks again Bear, you always know how to lift spirits. I may look around for some talent for it. I've already sent it out to a broader spectrum to see if I could find someone professionally. But again, thank you for listening. It is always a pleasure to hear from you! I hope you and your family are doing well.
ugh i was gonna kill this track on some dop shit..
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Thank you for reviewing the record and thanks for the input. I did not intend for the outro to be that long. I didn't have the time to shorten it. I do understand that there are still mix issues, I'll get to them in due time.
Nenah is a good vocalist.So much potential on this track.You can always change one or two things to make it perfect and i know you will do it since its just a rough mix.Good one.
This song has some potential. The vocals are very good. The only thing that really got my attention was the kick. It maybe me, but it sounds as if it's a bit too strong. Nevertheless, great vocals, and nice instrumental layout.
Thank you for the comment. As far as the kick goes, I do like to make it stand out because there's nothing I hate more than that a great melody is presented and then ruined by weak drums. But thank you for your input.
Thanks, I appreciate the feedback. I put stuff up on Looperman because I enjoy doing it. Hopefully, you might here my compositions somewhere. Thanks again for your kind words.
Thank you so much for your review. I really wanted to make something that people might want to listen to. I know a lot of my music is not for everyone but I hope to gain the interest of some listeners to enjoy. Thanks again.
YOU HAVE GOT TALENT but I would compose this song with some better instruments. I love the song but it sounds like a Disney type pop song. Perhaps you need someone to remix it for you. Anyway very good stuff!!!!!
Thank you for the feedback. I chose the instrumentation and structure based on what was suitable for that moment. I wasn't trying for the Disney sound. I just wanted to make a good record. As far as remixing goes, maybe you might be the person for the job.
Wow dude, this sounds like a song that can be in a romance movie or something. Only recommendation i have is a little bit more equalizing and a little more work on mixing it and you have a great track here!
Hey, thanks for the feedback and input. Unfortunately, I don't have any state of the art equipment to fully master my records. But I try to do the best I can. I appreciate all of what you've said and will try to implement the advice to future records. Thanks again.
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So anyway, I love this remix and the vocals are awesome too. Sounds like Ciara- who is it?
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This one is a 10 the way it stands, adding vocals will take it up another notch. I'll check back to see what happens. As I always say with your work Timmons - OUTSTANDING!!! I hope all is well.
Bear
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What Pop, this is an urban hit. I love the arp bro! Big respect..
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gj tho
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It's a little too wall of sound to my ear - I think the vocals should rise above the groove.
Might want to consider using the outro from 3:19 on as a bridge but also using it as an outro in shortened form. Lots of good parts to this.
Definitely has great potential - thanks for sharing.
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~Ookami
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Keep it up!
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Felix
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Good work!
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