You told us to criticize :-) let's go :-)
In my opinion the lead synth loop is not enough to make a song successful ... moreover this loop/theme does not work ... the whole song is monotonous, there is nothing interesting in it that the unsuspecting listener will pick up on ... these themes were written by you? ... and one more thing: there is no ending ... either let the song fade away, or choose a better sudden death, with a drum beat, bass sound ... well, I would have been happy if I wrote a song like this after 1 month, so don't consider this an attack...
fistbump, Danke
on Old Boom Bap by LocoMzf
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on Em 130 BPM by LocoMzf
on My first track by LocoMzf
if u speak russian, pls let me know.
the only thing is that level of mixer is kinda low. try to increase volume of mixer
on My first track by LocoMzf
if u speak russian, pls let me know.
the only thing is that level of mixer is kinda low. try to increase volume of mixer
on My first track by LocoMzf
You told us to criticize :-) let's go :-)
In my opinion the lead synth loop is not enough to make a song successful ... moreover this loop/theme does not work ... the whole song is monotonous, there is nothing interesting in it that the unsuspecting listener will pick up on ... these themes were written by you? ... and one more thing: there is no ending ... either let the song fade away, or choose a better sudden death, with a drum beat, bass sound ... well, I would have been happy if I wrote a song like this after 1 month, so don't consider this an attack...
fistbump, Danke