KARTASHOFF1999

Vocals starting at some parts a bit late
Bass is very high pitched a deeper bass would ve nice

Hey, I recognise that acapella, I also gave it a try :)
It's a fun mix! I like your best and how you used it. You could try to play with the timing a bit; it feels to me that some of the vocals could start half a beat later, but it's a hard one to get right. In any case, I liked it!