quadkanix

It's weird bro. It's like a salvia trip but different. It rambles the brain, but there's something I like about it. It's creative and kind of takes you to different places.

Last thing the first 3 seconds of the intro is not needed I feel like it's way too loud and painfully piercing to the ears. It could be reworked at a lower octave possibly.

The part at 0:33 SLAPS so hard. The intro and endtro are solid. Although at 0:47, I felt like moving away to 3 different ideas was kind of jarring since the vibe was so solid, but the ideas could def work but I feel like incorporating more of 0:33 would work.

Like I feel at 0:47 that 2nd idea was enough, once it goes to the bell, it feels out of place, not saying it could never work but the way all 3 ideas transitioned between each other made it feel unnatural.

I do love the sound at 1:17. You have a great ear for intense sounds. And def for ambience and atmosphere.

0:33 has the potential to be a full blown song on it's own, I feel like the most important thing is learning how to transition more smoothly.

Like at 0:47 it was smoother cause it retained the bass from the earlier bars, but at 1:02 it loses the bass completely. Which lacks that WALL of sound you had achieved starting at 0:33.

Over all though a solid track. Very distinct atmosphere. Could def see it used in a video game.