SorryDuck22

Wow, this is beautiful ! Thank's for sharing

Very Twilight Zone feeling - deeply dark with a splash of desolation that hugs the tune - love that touch of reverb at the end - well made

this is heavy dude very cool! makes me want to break shit for some reason lol. nice work

I like vocal a lot! Great job on track!
It is really cool.
Cheers!

Great song. The monotonous vocals combined with the music create a dark atmosphere. Like what you did with the vocals at 0:16. Too bad I can't understand the lyrics; I'm not a native speaker, and my hearing is deteriorating :)

Like what you did with the ending good outro

I like it you did a good job man. I always dig dark underground material!

Gentle, loving Indie song -heart-felt, authentic delivery - gently beautiful song

Very good song, thanks for share

Hello SorryDuck22, a loss such as this is very hard no doubt but a tribute such as this can help ease the loss in some small way.....a small remembrance done in honor of that person by you and well done .

I really like the song ,
& I'm sorry for your loss.

Wow great composition - frustration comes through very strong - what is the language, here - works a treat, whatever it is. I loved the tune - instantly inviting Indie with a blast of Fire towards the end

beat is crazy

You have a definitive style and I like it - nice track

Love this fuzzed up offering - v cool and unique sound

Don't be so negative! The trick is to keep creating and make something a little better every time!

I really like the vocals, they're well done. If you're interested to improve this further (and it's already good), there's a lot going on in the vocal registers (eg the guitar lick that's at similar time and notes as the vocals, the snare (?) which is maybe a bit loud, etc. Try to scoop out some space for your vocals in the other instruments with an EQ (and maybe some compression), so they come a bit more to the foreground without being overly loud.

That's just details, it's a very cool song!

A great Indie tune - vocals sound a bit quiet but overall, v pleasant