SorryDuck22

Hello SorryDuck22, real nice track, sad and somber as it us, good work .

Very beautiful and emotional piece of music. It is atmospheric as already said, very successfully crafted and performed.
Best regards Anthony

Bloody brilliant!!!
Downloaded, faved and friendly fistbumped!!!
Danke

Cool and atmospheric

I like the music track very much and your vocal too. Production sounds great. Be good to also publish the lyrics.

Wow, this is beautiful ! Thank's for sharing

Very Twilight Zone feeling - deeply dark with a splash of desolation that hugs the tune - love that touch of reverb at the end - well made

this is heavy dude very cool! makes me want to break ##### for some reason lol. nice work

I like vocal a lot! Great job on track!
It is really cool.
Cheers!

Great song. The monotonous vocals combined with the music create a dark atmosphere. Like what you did with the vocals at 0:16. Too bad I can't understand the lyrics; I'm not a native speaker, and my hearing is deteriorating :)

Like what you did with the ending good outro

I like it you did a good job man. I always dig dark underground material!

Gentle, loving Indie song -heart-felt, authentic delivery - gently beautiful song

Very good song, thanks for share

Hello SorryDuck22, a loss such as this is very hard no doubt but a tribute such as this can help ease the loss in some small way.....a small remembrance done in honor of that person by you and well done .

I really like the song ,
& I'm sorry for your loss.

Wow great composition - frustration comes through very strong - what is the language, here - works a treat, whatever it is. I loved the tune - instantly inviting Indie with a blast of Fire towards the end

beat is crazy

You have a definitive style and I like it - nice track

Love this fuzzed up offering - v cool and unique sound

Don't be so negative! The trick is to keep creating and make something a little better every time!

I really like the vocals, they're well done. If you're interested to improve this further (and it's already good), there's a lot going on in the vocal registers (eg the guitar lick that's at similar time and notes as the vocals, the snare (?) which is maybe a bit loud, etc. Try to scoop out some space for your vocals in the other instruments with an EQ (and maybe some compression), so they come a bit more to the foreground without being overly loud.

That's just details, it's a very cool song!

A great Indie tune - vocals sound a bit quiet but overall, v pleasant