BlairDaHitMaker

Great work!

I say it is a cool song, very well put together. I like that it actually is a life story and a story that most of us have lived.
Well done.
Best regards, Anthony

This is pretty out there, so I like it a lot. Had me in a trance. Cheers Zoot.

So darned cool..What direction are you going..Love the way it weaves through the speakers, sounds terrific and vocals are lovely

Rap is tight and flowing and there is a sense of despair permeating through it - please can you add the lyrics?

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Raw, fresh and beat-perfect - a bit cinematic - brilliant

great track bro!

Fire!

Hot beat! hot production! hot vocals! fire track! larry

Fire!! This Beat is dope big up. Prod on point!

This is dope! Beat goes hard as heck, rapping is on point, nice job!

Well shit. I'll be sure to keep up with your tracks, sounds good!

nice production man shit

vocals sit really well aswell, good rapping aswell shit that you?

nice man

(LF)

Damn !! I like it . Reminds me of that 3 six shit from back in tha days. Keep that real shit alive !!! Check me out too. !!

The rap is actually on fire i love it.

The beat is dope too.

nice one , add more bASS

Besides The Change In Kicks & Snares This Track Is Really Simplistic. You Should Add Some Type Of Melody To It To Make It Have A More Thick Feeling It. Also There Needs To Be Some Bass Added Since It's Rap. Probably Some Aggressive 808's. Also, Change Up The Chords Would Help Enhance The Production Or Maybe Adding Layers Of Chords Together. But Nevertheless It's A Cool Production.

- Billion

I understand this is gonna back a rap and I can imagine it being very effective. as a standalone I start to wish for a little change-up. but nice mix for sure. best of luck with more development. Dan

If it wasn't for nice changes in drum patterns this would have sounded like an infinite loop due to its apparent repetitiveness, yet that repetitive bit is actualy ok...well
done in that respect!:)

All the best____Orlando

cool beat, but if i were you I'd give those kicks and the melodies some life homie it's like im listening to the same chord through out the wholeeee beat... but it's well put together. check me out im also a bigginer learn a whoooole lot off of you tube tutorials man, they are great trust me.
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My volume is at 50 and i can hear it ok.
hope you get some vocals to this, think it would sound pretty dope with the right rapper :D

- Sean

The wave is close to flatline ...
Positve feedback: it's definitely not too loud!

Seemingly you don't want us to hear it. Or am I deaf?

that first beat is killer i know its not yours but u hav nice flow also...can i suggest the blue snowball mic. i found one for 60 bucks...