I really really like this, very good work here! The chosen piano chords is what got me right away. I also like the part where you make the chords echo in each side of my head. Perfect choice of drum for this, and I like that part where the beat skips a bit before the break in the music. Not initially a fan of the sound of the break until the other sound swells in with it, and it surprisingly goes well with the piano chords. I like how you chose to change the pace up by adding the break and taking away the drums at certain times. Changing the pace is very important to keep a listener engaged!
This is a good start. For a reference, the piano chord structure is the same as Marina and the Diamonds song Lies. There are a few good remixes of this song which could give you some ideas.
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Great track, I enjoyed this!
on bittersweet by gregjones
on bittersweet by gregjones
on bittersweet by gregjones