Hi boyz, the voice at around 16 secs, i would drop the volume a little, personally i would phase and reverb it but more phaser, and then perhaps ehco the very last section perhaps to a 1/8t simliar to that chainsaw sound you got there. Apart from that very dramatic and unnaturally eerie. Well done!
Great smooth and catchy intro, getting that Latin vibe with the cowbell... here come the drums... dang - Wanted more bass... but here it comes in a nice little jump progression - that's a nice stack with everything going at once, shakers, cowbell, kit, organ, bass - it's a great blend!
About 2:35 in... no bridge yet - a tad repetitive as the organ has been going the entire time, but I have mixed feelings. A part wants there to be a change - but another part would like to hear some vocals and maybe the vocals could add the variety I'm waiting to hear.
Fading out. Very easy to listen to, good production as far as mixing/blending/transitions. But after it all I was still looking for something to mix it up in the middle - to break the trance the organ had put me into.
Those are my two cents my friend! Your melody and sound here definitely caught my attention, keep it up!
Ya i can make beats but ..putting lyrics together is diffrent , but im learning it ..you can have this beat if you want it ..and Thankyou for the review
Very sentimental and a beautiful track. sorry to hear of the unfortunate inspiration.. Hope all is well.
On a side note, pleased to hear you are working towards producing a cd, best of luck with that process
JSL, always bringing somethin unique to the table! This worked out great man, out of the box, but tasteful. I look forward to wherever you go next musically.. no idea what to expect, but it'll be good haha
Very nice sounding track right from start to finish, good use of instruments I was wondering if you could perhaps do a little more with the bass? I think with a more prominent bassline you could nail this track!
Nice stuff man; like the harp sounding melody: overall a solid track. The only thing I can point at is the sound quality at times: but I'm pretty sure that's just the file type. ; ) Keep doing your thing!
tricky beat mane i love it.good synth work, old school brother commin straight at you young pimp. i like that wierd track to,great choice of samples.do what you do.
Bet tell you what i'll do , drop your email and i'll send you clean cut version ..without lyrics , and you spit on it and just drop my name it some where ..word on that review KrayoLaBlacks
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Great smooth and catchy intro, getting that Latin vibe with the cowbell... here come the drums... dang - Wanted more bass... but here it comes in a nice little jump progression - that's a nice stack with everything going at once, shakers, cowbell, kit, organ, bass - it's a great blend!
About 2:35 in... no bridge yet - a tad repetitive as the organ has been going the entire time, but I have mixed feelings. A part wants there to be a change - but another part would like to hear some vocals and maybe the vocals could add the variety I'm waiting to hear.
Fading out. Very easy to listen to, good production as far as mixing/blending/transitions. But after it all I was still looking for something to mix it up in the middle - to break the trance the organ had put me into.
Those are my two cents my friend! Your melody and sound here definitely caught my attention, keep it up!
LEILAND
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Really cool track.... nasty.
The real let down though is the mix,.... it's soooo muddy. It sounds like I'm listening to it with pillows over my phones.
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When I lost a friend I found some solace in making tracks in their memory and knowing that they were probably stood at my shoulder watching over me.
This is a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing.
Elaine
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On a side note, pleased to hear you are working towards producing a cd, best of luck with that process
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Keep them coming
John