AE03hua

nice track great to here something different and authentic very well done, production is great and the vocal is beautiful is that your voice AE?

I also liked the mood and the melody and the vocals of the song

Well there you see how good your song is. I remembered it Songs you remember are just the best!

An interesting idea)

Hello, beautiful song! But somehow he looks very familiar to me? Have you released this song before? Whatever. I really enjoyed this musical journey.
Best wishes to the “Empire of the Sun” Manuela

This is brilliant!
So rich in composition and the mood of the track is outstanding. It has a utopian feel ...
hats off,
Danke

Hi AE03hua.

This is a very interesting track. I will take some time to listen to the others you have uploaded here on Looperman.

In this track I do hear some distinctly Chinese music influences, I think. I haven't really analyzed what they are, but I think they come from the timbre of some of the instruments, the intervals that they play, and what sounds to me like some micro tuning. Anyway, they made the sound of the track very distinctive, unique, and it all works really well.

I see that you also use Synthesizer V in some of your tracks. I am learning to use it as well. It seems to be a very promising tool for making good vocals. I just wish they had voices in French and Italian. Maybe that will come with time.

I do have some suggestions about the mix of this track. I agree with Danke that you should raise the volume on the drum track)s). But, I also feel that the various sounds blend together too much. I think perhaps there is too much reverb being used. I think as you work on refining the mix, you should try to make each instrument/part stand out more distinctly in the mix, both in terms of its place in the frequency spectrum and spatially (e.g., panning, and very careful use of reverb settings to place different sounds closer or further in the soundfield.)

That said, I very much enjoyed the track.

Regards from Ottawa,

Eric

Good job mate, Sounds Solid!

You have made some excellent music here, I like a lot of these tracks. I also like the humour in your titles, it's not often you see foraminifera in a title, those beautiful little creatures! Or catkins. Happy birthday!

brilliant, moody track with the standards of nowadays music making ...
only one advice from me:
- raise the volume of the drum track(s)
fistbump,
Dankee

Nice one! I'm not sure on the genre though, it sounds more orchestral than edm, but nonetheless it's good work.

Superior soundscape, love it!

Hello and happy new year! An amazingly good production! Great use of instruments. Only the transition between 2:14 and the finale at 4:13 seems a bit too stark and then too long for my taste. In my opinion, the finale with the ending was well done again. While listening, I actually had the feeling of taking a ride on a subway with its sometimes hectic, sometimes long-winded hustle and bustle. Overall I really liked it too. Excellent production! Hats off to you!
Kind regards, Manuela

Nice work - gentle layers of sound, nice movement and melodic flourishes - a very pleasing ride on your aural subway

hello my friend, i have listened to you a few times now and i cant recall if i have commented before, i apologise for that, you are a talent, this time i decided to check your profile :))
your a talented musician too violin clarinet Chinese drums, go you. like Mikes comment before this is delightful multi layered music to be truthful i assumed you were male for some unknown reason, i have made that mistake before too, i thought a male artist was female, did we laugh though. its great to finally say hi and have another female in our fold as we are male dominated really, im Paul, im a good guy but my alter ego is dimestop...he's brutal, you get a fav lady

yikes this is really captivating dreamy vibrantly layered music! this reaches for the stars

Awesome mix of elements.

10/10

"According to Norinaga, to "know" mono no aware is to have a shrewd understanding and consideration of reality and the assortment of occurrences present; to be affected by and appreciate the beauty of cherry blossoms was an example of this knowledge provided by Norinaga."

I'll be very honest - I spent the past 5 minutes trying to understand the concept but I don't think that's enough ;)

I love your track though and I could totally see it in an anime!

really cool transforms and flow. reflective — tranquil and troubled, the sense of years passing. beautiful use of the materials and very nice mix.

Nice work - I wonder if you fade some of synth sounds in and out a little more the sound would be less settled in the middle (as Manuela says) and you might make more space for other elements in the track / we might hear some different frequencies, but it is really good already. And hey you have a lifetime of making music ahead of you, can you imagine how good you are going to sound by the time the next birthday comes : )

It's already been your birthday, but still
congratulations on your birthday.
Your patience has paid off.
A very nice track.
Very well done.

nice composition with finesse, very pleasant to listen to! good job dude!
Michael

It is amazing.

It sounds mysterious and interesting)

Hello, first of all I'm amazed by the work you've done here! The composition, the structure, the use of the instruments and the effects are outstanding. The voice generated by the synthesizer is excellent! This could be a very big song. If you still put time and energy into the mix and mastering. There is still a lot that can be done. The sound chokes a bit. Frequently everything is settled too much in the middle. The same applies to the volume. You rob the song of the power it could have. Try to change that, then you can have a great future with the song and maybe also with future songs! Greetings Manuela