ThePixelatedBit

I love the melody and vocals on this. There's some kind of ducking effect going on at every bass drum beat, though. The music volume dips for a second when the bass drum hits it almost sounds like something is going through a side chain dynamically on that signal flow. Other than that nice tune.

This one has a lot of potential for sure. The vocals are nice, but in my honest opinion, it doesn't fit the instrumental. In some parts, it feels like the instrumental and vocals are fighting one another to be on top. That's just my two cents but otherwise, I think you did a good job and could see this one being a massive success with some tweaking.