I really your tracks, congrats! I could try and sing this one if you like? I could send you a draft and we could take it from there. Let me know if you’re interested. :)
That's very good! And yes, that invites some singing, doesn't it? (Although you may need to change the arrangements a mod to make space for lyrics).
Great job!
Of course valid criticism matters! I do appreciate it )) I've been having the same issue (everything's too loud) in my last couple of tracks. Gotta learn how to avoid it
I like it. Needs some pop smoke on it. Nice switch with shotgun. Good work on transitions cuz I like my creations a variety I don't like it with just one type of sound good work
this is a brilliant composition but a tad bit over volumed ... but musically it's fantastic ... another thing: the end is abrupted ... maybe leave that guitar on the fade out mode ...
greetings, Danke
Definitely gives off an old school a trip-hop vibe like Massive Attack or Portishead. I like the lyrics too, they hit home for me personally. I think a cleaner re-record of the vocals and some overall mastering will be well worth it. Great track. Cheers!
I actually like the tone of your voice & kudos to you plucking up the courage to sing on your own little masterpieces who would not respect that. Fair-play to you for doing this & if I'm honest I have to say this whole production had an *EVANESCENCE* vibe running through it. My nod of approval is always a fave on your productions. This Rocks! Kudos!
It must have been a good potato. Don't worry about your voice I think it is more than fine. Reminds me a little of the singer from portishead. I liked the lyrics too.
Hello, We at Jackal Studios want to put this song in our upcoming cyberpunk anime called UndaWorld we would like permission to use it with regard and credit I would also be happy to give you my discord that way you can join us with music production (we also need voice actors) moving along I await your reply...
I can totally hear how a Evanescense-like vocal would be amazing here (or Tori Amos maybe?).
I would urge you to give it a try - mixing vocals is hard (I suck at it so I won't give you advice) but you know what, often when I try people give useful advice here.
The track cuts off unexpectedly mid-phrase at 2:24, was that your intention?
Good luck. It takes guts to put out your vocals, I know that, but trying and getting feedback can only make you better :)
Thanks for the encouragement! It's scary to let people hear me sing but I agree with you that it must be done in order to get better.
Oh, to sing like Amy Lee would be a dream come true hehe
Nice work - does remind me of the theme for a show - but that's not a criticism - it's somewhat captivating, a little bit of an earworm and gives a sense of urgency and movement, nice depth to the sound and nice production too. Never entirely in love with trap type beats as they seem so overused but they work well here : )
Music is an extension of ourselves/mood &a way to express how we are feeling/experiences. All I know is this is such an incredible piece so however you were feeling when you made this a little masterpiece emerged & what a most BRILLIANT! & GREAT track this truly is. Kudos!
This is an AMAZING! track here, your talent to make music is a gift & undeniable. This has a GREAT! sound and wonderful! arrangement indeed. Another well produced piece of musical ART. Keep up the awesome! work. Kudos!
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I really your tracks, congrats! I could try and sing this one if you like? I could send you a draft and we could take it from there. Let me know if you’re interested. :)
Don’t stop singing, you are talented!
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Great job!
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Danke
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greetings, Danke
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it's a bit like this music is a transcription of a book...
huge mood, cool groovy ...
greetings, Danke
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I would urge you to give it a try - mixing vocals is hard (I suck at it so I won't give you advice) but you know what, often when I try people give useful advice here.
The track cuts off unexpectedly mid-phrase at 2:24, was that your intention?
Good luck. It takes guts to put out your vocals, I know that, but trying and getting feedback can only make you better :)
Oh, to sing like Amy Lee would be a dream come true hehe
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Music is an extension of ourselves/mood &a way to express how we are feeling/experiences. All I know is this is such an incredible piece so however you were feeling when you made this a little masterpiece emerged & what a most BRILLIANT! & GREAT track this truly is. Kudos!
Angelus
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This is an AMAZING! track here, your talent to make music is a gift & undeniable. This has a GREAT! sound and wonderful! arrangement indeed. Another well produced piece of musical ART. Keep up the awesome! work. Kudos!
Angelus
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