Beat is sick , Lyrics from all MCs potent and thoughtful...Flows unique and on point ...Prob the best flow I've heard from DT , syncopated ...Im bumpin this joint!Nice work much respect to all artists involved ...
Now the salt ..lol naw the only thing I would recommend is make that radio tuning in bout half the length it is and lower the volume for that same sample bout half as well ..
this is a burner though
Arg , me hardy dids thy remix thy track ...May drank a 5th a skeez to dis Argggg , soundin better to mine ear, i would recommend ryhme structure , change-ups etc . arg take me to the 7 seas
This beat is laid back and tight. Volume on first verse is really low still . There is a strange feedback sound that permeates over the track. Flow pacing matches well rhythmically.Lyrics on point.
Dee bringing more energy and confidence on this and is sounding nice. There is that same fuzz on his verses too .Remix and remaster this track and it will be a nice track indeed!!!
I love the theme , title fits perfectly ...Surprised you used that sample it works but compared to the subject matter almost seems whimsical(don't take that wrong)I think you can find a more suitable sample that more cohesively meshes with the rest of the song . It seems the volume levels on DT's first verse are low but your second is ok volume wise .
As always your lyrics are thoughtful, metaphorical and uplifting. Your cadence and delivery are getting sharper which comes with experience of coarse. Sounds like your simplifying or should I say editing words to smooth your flow so to speak.
Dee has a cool voice and unique sound. If he brought more confidence he would shine , I think he needs to believe he can spit on the mic as well as he makes those sick beats...that as well comes with experience. Lyrics here are on point as well , I would just say more consistent volume and inflection and that confidence factor will take Dee to the next Level.
Beat has a nice celebration feel to it , nice job of matching Subject and Instrumental...
Keep Creating...One Love...Haru Merti
great beat great context great lyrics the mixing sounds bad, your flow with the beat sounds off to my ears. the singing is definately off. but
stay sucka free and keep prospering.
I like the emotional edgy inflection in your vocals , also your cadence and delivery are being fine tuned by you in a rhythmic sense . Your finding your flow with each new track . Lyrics as always thoughtful and thought provoking ...
appreciate you taking time to listen and review it. Its really funny how you say it reminded you of jamaroqui" because when i was looking for a hook to go with the verses I cam across AdamTaha and that exactly what i thought, his voice had bit of that neo-soul in it, it also reminded me of "jamaroqui"
That new mic working wonders for your vocals man , lyrics on point ... I love the intro sample - I like the combo of all artisans on this track . You did a good job with matching vocal and beat volumes . Beat is sickness as well , overall an original underground burner...
Beat is tight , Lyrics on point , Almost as good as The Last Mission .. lol What effects you got on the vocals - I hear a loud reverb that makes your voice sound muffled on the vocals , clean that up and this is an underground hit Deep Thought
on Leaving The Past by DeepThought9
Seriously, really enjoyed your track, my friend, and definitely hear a lot of talent. Keep them coming.
John
on Xpressionz by DeepThought9
on Xpressionz by DeepThought9
Now the salt ..lol naw the only thing I would recommend is make that radio tuning in bout half the length it is and lower the volume for that same sample bout half as well ..
this is a burner though
on Xpressionz by DeepThought9
on Leaving The Past by DeepThought9
on Quatum Tranmissions by DeepThought9
Dee bringing more energy and confidence on this and is sounding nice. There is that same fuzz on his verses too .Remix and remaster this track and it will be a nice track indeed!!!
Keep Creating...One Love...Haru Merti
on Time to Build and Shine by DeepThought9
As always your lyrics are thoughtful, metaphorical and uplifting. Your cadence and delivery are getting sharper which comes with experience of coarse. Sounds like your simplifying or should I say editing words to smooth your flow so to speak.
Dee has a cool voice and unique sound. If he brought more confidence he would shine , I think he needs to believe he can spit on the mic as well as he makes those sick beats...that as well comes with experience. Lyrics here are on point as well , I would just say more consistent volume and inflection and that confidence factor will take Dee to the next Level.
Beat has a nice celebration feel to it , nice job of matching Subject and Instrumental...
Keep Creating...One Love...Haru Merti
on Leaving The Past by DeepThought9
stay sucka free and keep prospering.
on Quatum Tranmissions by DeepThought9
on Metamorphsis (Nu Life) by DeepThought9
on Wild-Flowers by DeepThought9
on Metamorphsis (Nu Life) by DeepThought9
on Leaving The Past by DeepThought9
jamaroqui. Love the vibe in here, love the intensity in this track. Good track
on Leaving The Past by DeepThought9
on SoundWave Cyphers by DeepThought9
on SoundWave Cyphers by DeepThought9
on SoundWave Cyphers by DeepThought9