I like it. I especially like the piano bit at the beginning, but I also like the part after say 1:10.
Only comment I would have is that the build-up seems long compared to the "pay-off", so maybe you can shorten the first part a bit and make the main part longer?
on AB RAIHAN-Be Happy by abraihan
Only comment I would have is that the build-up seems long compared to the "pay-off", so maybe you can shorten the first part a bit and make the main part longer?