Despite that you have downloaded the piano and vocal from here it seems like you have put quite lots of effort in it. I like the atmospherics and the saw base although it could have more variations. The bubbly base is just cool. Maybe bit more compression into it so the vocal is more on the top. Otherwise not bad tune at all. Just do me a favor. Do not come back to this one. It take much time. Make another few keep em coming bro.
Thanks u ur comment m8 I no what meen I'm did not do much eq ing or compressing but now I do when I fine my new track I'll put it on here so u can have a lason
Well for ur opening beats I would rly suggest compression. U rly need it it for ur kicks and maybe a little for ur claps. Also for ur claps I would suggest about 10% reverb. Trust me, it needs it. I don't mean to always seem negitive but how can u ever get better?
I did love the Bass riff! That was rly good and the fill that was awesome! I wish I could write Bass like that, but I'm more of a melody man. Oh make sure to check out my tracks since I checked out urs. Anyways nice work ;)
I like the start up! With all the beats and stuff but I jus feel the vocals just don't go well w the music for some reason. I guess it's just the fact of when I use someone elses work I can't rly feel it that well if u kno what I mean. Nice though I'd rly like to kno what u used for the start up that was cool :D
I like this it has a lovely vibe the whole way through, but in all honesty the ending is kind of rude, as oppose to smooth, I felt i was slap out of a lovely dream, instead of being gently let out of the dream.
Yes I was hook from the first couple seconds!! But I got a really good suggestion: The melody when it goes like this:
up up
up down down
up down
down (something like that, anyways as a fill after about the third loop,at the last part where u go down u should go so it goes like this:
up up
up down down
up down
down
Down
Down
Down
I know its kinda hard to understand, but do u get what i'm sayin?
if you send me the midi file to my email which I'll private message u, I'll do it for u
Upbeat and fun is right! This track puts a smile on my face! Nice bass line! Great fills! Those drums sound awesome in general, very snappy. Nice mix! Well done!
on parodice by DJNVAKAMO
on Forest Fruits by DJNVAKAMO
I did love the Bass riff! That was rly good and the fill that was awesome! I wish I could write Bass like that, but I'm more of a melody man. Oh make sure to check out my tracks since I checked out urs. Anyways nice work ;)
on Haeven by DJNVAKAMO
on Haeven by DJNVAKAMO
on da foces is with u by DJNVAKAMO
up up
up down down
up down
down (something like that, anyways as a fill after about the third loop,at the last part where u go down u should go so it goes like this:
up up
up down down
up down
down
Down
Down
Down
I know its kinda hard to understand, but do u get what i'm sayin?
if you send me the midi file to my email which I'll private message u, I'll do it for u
on Forest Fruits by DJNVAKAMO