Hey girl, sorry to hear that about your homelessness, that totally sucks. Hope you can get on your feet! Regarding the song, the piano loop is very overpowering for me, especially as I can't hear your voice anymore, and when I can, I think your vocal is actually interesting (at 1:02). Try to dial back the piano loop at least 10 dB and see what that gives you. Maybe also introduce a second/different loop, so you can introduce a bit of variation and make it stronger. Good luck, both in music and life!
Thank you so much!!!!! May you copy and paste Renee foxchild your name into YouTube or Spotify or Apple and tell me what you think about the final version. They ran the song through a different engine and did some studio magic.
Commented on PICK ME WORKTAPE by BAFFMETT
this is real nice good work
Commented on Renee Foxchild Your Name the DEMO by BAFFMETT
good work on the vocals, interesting and original track!
Michael
Commented on Renee Foxchild Your Name the DEMO by BAFFMETT
Hey girl, sorry to hear that about your homelessness, that totally sucks. Hope you can get on your feet!
Regarding the song, the piano loop is very overpowering for me, especially as I can't hear your voice anymore, and when I can, I think your vocal is actually interesting (at 1:02). Try to dial back the piano loop at least 10 dB and see what that gives you. Maybe also introduce a second/different loop, so you can introduce a bit of variation and make it stronger.
Good luck, both in music and life!